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Torsten Hewson
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Book 3 release problem+ chapter delay.

Okay: this is in the interest of transparency. After two relatively smoothly released volumes, I have managed to have a bit of a cockup with this one. Effectively there were two problem chapters.

One, where I used the old patreon chapter instead of the revised chapter.  This is where Tigu first meets Delun. The other was where Xianghua meets Ri Zu. That one just somehow disappeared between the developmental edit and the copy edit, and I just did not notice its disappearance. A couple of beta readers also missed this, But their job was more finding and fixing mistakes in grammar and thus it's understandable that something like this slipped through. The final editor I used was different from the dev editor who worked on most of the book as well. Finally, Editing fatigue and being extremely ill at the end of the edits certainly didn't help.

Now. The good news is that this is all being fixed. There should be a free update to the kindle and Audio versions of the book relatively soon, which is the benefit of digital publishing. I have also taken steps to ensure this doesn't happen again.

This doesn't change the fact that its a mistake on my end and I would like to apologise to everybody for it.

My day has been spent fixing this mistake, and thus the chapter will be delayed today. Again, sorry for the pausing on the cliffhanger, but I needed to fix this as fast as I could. My only wish is that it didn't happen in the first place.

Comments

To quote Deborah Harry, "Accidents never happen in a perfect world."

Jack Everitt

Has the update gone out yet?

Chichi son

I'm so glad you did move the cave and the crystal chapters into volume 3, they fit much better there!

taukid

These things happen. I was listening to it while preparing Thanksgiving dinner. Thought I'd missed that part because I was distracted. Glad you caught it as soon as you did. Any idea when the update for the audio will happen?

Echo Sparksong

Oh no! I just found the link to the pre-order for the hardcover book 2 and it doesn't work. Have I missed the window?

Brandon Schmidt

Are the audiobook and kindle one fixed yet? I’m not sure of the difference so I can’t check and I didn’t want to start book 3 until it’s fixed.

CringeWorthyStudios

I have to be totally honest; I started the audiobook, and after a few Chapters, I skipped the build up to listen to the epic showdown in audio. I know myself well enough that I wouldn’t enjoy the great chapters in the buildup, waiting for the epic clash in audio form. Now I can wait for the update and truly enjoy the buildup. I enjoyed it the first time because I didn’t know the climax was coming, and I wanted to appreciate it properly again with the great narrator!

Matt

The title of the missing one was Steps to the End part 3 on patreon. It should be right where the crystal caverns chapters were inserted after “crossroads of destiny” in the final

Featherweight

Thank you for the update. As I was taught to say in D.C., "situations occur" (for some reason people didn't like me saying shit happens). Still have enjoyed Book 3 and am looking forward to your next one(s) being published.

Old Dog

Sorry that there was a mistake but at least it seems easy to fix. I’ve been listening to the audio book version and I’ve been enjoying it immensely. Looking forward to listening to book 4.

Rebel Rebel

Good luck

Mikkel Raffnsøe Koefoed

Thank you for the swift correction, your hard work is appreciated. Mistakes happen, it's part of life. What's important is that you admit it and fix it. Both of which you did, so what more could we ask for.

Demian Buckle

Same question I was going to ask. I would like to know which chapter is missing, a CF did say one was missing.

Demian Buckle

Either way, as someone listening to the audiobook and almost done, I'd love to just know which chapters to listen to for the changes instead of having to start over entirely.

The GrandMage

Oh thank heavens, I was worried it had been cut for unknown reasons

Eli Pomerantz

Life happens. Thank you for fixing this.

Spell Craft

It's not missing it was a rewrite. It's near the start when tigu is fighting her first opponent. There a part were Yun and Gou are talking trying to make out what she's saying to Tie delun. That's suppose to be us(the reader) just watching it from tigu. I know this cuase this is my book and noticed it the very second I heard it cause I've read it like 40 times.

Justus Saucedo

As someone listening to the Audio book currently what chapter number is missing and is there an ETA on the update?

Chichi son

As previous people said mistakes happen ... sure things are best when there are no mistakes but nearly as good is when the mistakes get admitted to and fixed instead of ignored or denied like some do

Chichi son

I was wondering why the was a bit of a gap in the middle of the book.

Npad11111

It's just an accident, can happen to anyone. No need to worry, your fans are decent people and will understand. I'll just reread vol1 while waiting 😄

Leili Mård

It happens, I’m glad you caught it before it went to print! Take your time, we’ll be here waiting

Thomas Brusilovsky

Just tell us which chapters they are once it's fixed! I'd like to listen to them without searching lol!

Andrew Purser

Mistakes happen. You're doing everything any of us could ask you to about it.

Anzer'ke

your Mea Culpa is recognized, recite 12 chicken puns and be forgiven

Maltec

Happens to the best of us, I once sent an official letter misspelling both my own name, their name and the name of hospital I worked at. It was also double checked by atleast 2 other people

Thomas Todd

Save a copy of the "first edition" ebook and audiobook on your computer!

TwoRavens

It's no problem CF, glad to see that your problem's being fixed! Take your time~

Kasinki

Impressive that it hasn’t happened thus far, great of you to inform us and apologize, looking forward to upcoming chapter!

Vlad Dogarel

Happens. :)

Konrad2

Mistakes happen. The important part is that you admitted that you made a mistake and you are fixing it. Keep on writing, you’re doing great!

Skyguard

All good. Glad it isn't in print yet at least so you have time to work all the bugs out before people might complain. Take a good rest!

Aaron

Almost makes me wish there had been a paper copy already. Misprints like that usually become a collectors item for the future if the series gets popular enough. Unfortunately, as more and more things become Digital, we will probably see less of that.

Carl Smith

No worries man take your time! Love all your work!

Lucas Johns

No big deal just take your time and if you are too fatigued take a break. I will reread while waiting 🙂

Mackienze Robinson

Grandpa always said mistakes happen, it's how you deal with them that counts. You're owning the problem, explaining what happened, squaring things up, and taking steps to ensure there won't be a repeat; basically everything one could ask for in the situation. Kudos to you for doing things right.

Just A Dude

You do wonderful work. It’s no trouble at all. Thank you for your hard work. If you celebrate it, Happy Thanksgiving. If not, have a great day.

Geese

No worries! Glad it was caught and fixed quickly!

01anon

No problem! Hooray for digital publishing 🥳

Lanter

Life happens!

Ainslie Divers

Mistakes happen! Naturally nobody wants them to happen, but I am kind of glad it happened now instead of with the first book. I believe, everyone who has read your story so far is filled with love for your characters and understanding. Still, sorry you had to suffer the experience!

Namorat

No worries, I hope things go smoothly from here on out for you!

BlueMage_VT

No worries,casual. Stuff happens.

Chaded

Your honesty and transparency are very much appreciated. We know that you care!

BargleNawdleZouss

There's always something that editors and copy editors miss. I'm glad you're transparent about the problem and also that it was caught before the finality of physical printing. Things like this are much more expensive to fix after they've been printed.

Keliana Tayler

Eh, Shit happens. The important thing is that you learn from this experience. Also thanks for informing us about it

AG

Well, I missed yesterday's chapter release, so it's like you never missed anything at all 💜

Green0Photon

Thanks for letting us know! Good luck! I bought the book for a friend so I’ll tell them to hold off!

Cam

You're fans are looking out for you boss!

WarStrider72


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