Jo's Fair - Page 5 (HD)
Added 2021-05-22 21:27:01 +0000 UTCI'm particularly proud of this and the next page. Mouse and I worked together more than usual (normally I just describe scenes and provide references, and he just gets it perfect on the first try 90% of the time) on the visual presentation here. I tried to make these two pages feel like "film", rather than a comic, by utilizing framing and distance from the reader. I really hope that the transition from a close-up, to a mid close-up, to a mid-shot to finish Jo opening up about her past trauma adds more emotional impact to the dialogue; that's what I was going for.
Thanks for your patience on these two pages. They were a lot of work and they really needed to be perfect for how important they are to this story and the series as a whole.
Comments
Personal; I'll elaborate more on it when the issue is done.
Colson Grainger
2021-05-23 18:07:23 +0000 UTCThose angles and dialogue came out so so well. Really hit with the emotional impact on this page and deeply saddening experience for Jo to go through. I can really feel her pain and sorrow. Outstanding stuff as always <3
Regdeh
2021-05-23 07:41:08 +0000 UTCOh my. Such detail... With Jo's mother's condition... did you looked this up or was it an experience for you?
SilverZeo
2021-05-23 00:14:35 +0000 UTC
