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Dev Talks - #1

This is my first time making anything like this and I'm thankful for the supportive words and honest feedback I received on other platforms regarding the game. I made this to get my hands on renpy and see how the process will take on making a visual novel game. I want to test things out and have fun while making it so that I'm more prepared for my next games.
Your support and feedback would mean a lot to me and I'll keep improving forward.

Comments

Thank you for the feedback!!! :) I'll keep on trying to make it better.

Seli Krof

Played it several times, and I'll share you what I think needs to be modified. Inconsistency in AI style: Some CGs are more cartoon-like, and the inconsistency in style will make people feel bad. But there are also good CGs, such as the sex scene between Jenny and Tracy, and the series of differences are very well done. I like Jenny's character design very much, and I look forward to seeing the follow-up development. I hope your game will get better and better!

alya

Glad you enjoyed it. ;) . Also, thanks to Jenny, Nathan gets a chance to fool around if he wants lol. There will definitely be stuff in the future and you'll get an idea of how the story will go when v0.2 drops.

Seli Krof

The start get me hooked immediately, how the gf "unintentionally" let the bf wait in the airport while taking dick at home is hot. XD It's also not unique in a way, your story start with a the couple already very open about their kink and lifestyle. I think would be especially good if you're to introduce more hardcore stuffs in the future, you can avoid rush pacing or needing a lot of build up to evolve their dynamic.

Chen


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