Brother Bewitched Chapter15
Added 2023-06-09 04:01:00 +0000 UTCPattenia, Devin, Actonia and Asryn defend the palace. Serren's experiences as a woman continue to change him.
Comments
Thanks so much! I do spend a lot of time setting up and lighting the shots, sometimes shooting them from multiple angles trying to find the right one. Anyway, I appreciate the compliment! I am excited for the release of Chapter 16 (tonight at midnight ET)! Let me know what you think!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-06-29 14:09:14 +0000 UTCI have to say it again very good artwork I look forward to seeing what happens next chapter thank you for writing this series.
Joseph c guillory
2023-06-29 05:40:55 +0000 UTCI will provide no spoilers! However, I did intend their different fighting styles shown in the last chapter to each reveal something of their personalities.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-06-13 20:09:34 +0000 UTCI like Cyn's transformation but I am a little worried about the gender spell becoming too casual. I think you should put some limitations. If not, crazy Paternia will soon gender swap half of the noble men, resulting on making Seren's (and Cyn's doom) a common place, and therefore weakening the storyline (IMHO). In the novel, if I remember well, the spell is rather long to cast and require several witches joining their energies. If we want just Actonia performing the spell quickly, I think we should balance it with a rare ingredient, or maybe a long cooling time before using the spell again.
Alexia
2023-06-13 13:49:28 +0000 UTCI anticipate with pleasure the scene of Serenina's rescue... π. With both Devin and Asryn around, it will be interesting. Asryn seems less clumsy in the comic than in the novel. But if there is any competition between both, Devin will be my favorite because more manly... (I am not asking for any spoiler, I write this just because I like doing speculations...)
Alexia
2023-06-13 13:39:50 +0000 UTCYes. I haven't been looking at them on a phone.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-06-13 10:02:21 +0000 UTCYou will see that scene. It will come a little later after Serren's experiences have changed him a little more.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-06-13 10:01:29 +0000 UTCAny ideas or thoughts if you I'm going to add serrenia to appear before him as a ghost.
Joseph c guillory
2023-06-13 05:54:35 +0000 UTCDon't worry, at some point I will read again all the story on my computer. But maybe from now on, you should check the pictures on your mobile device?
Alexia
2023-06-13 04:42:11 +0000 UTCYou remember right. Cyn is a new character, though will not play a major role (I don't think!). In the books, it took more time and effort to cast a gender change spell, so it wasn't as much of a quick option. For the comic, I decided to make it possible for Actonia to cast the spell more readily. Pattenia will use it strategically to strike fear in her enemies.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-06-13 03:21:03 +0000 UTCI don't remember Cyn in the books?
Beverly
2023-06-13 01:59:33 +0000 UTCI'm sorry to hear about the problem with the light. The images are all discernable on my computer monitor, but it is much larger than a phone screen! I have noticed that sometimes when I view the material on a tablet they appear darker, so there is a difference based on the tool used to view the material. I know you are a fan of BB, so it really discouraging to me you aren't able to enjoy them on your device. I may explore if there is a way to create a "brighter" version without re-doing all the pictures. Stay tuned!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-06-12 04:51:38 +0000 UTCIt's nice to get a long chapter but I was a little frustrated by an issue with the pictures : some are so dark that I don't clearly see what they represent. I set the luminosity to max but it doesn't solve the problem. Maybe it is just my phone? I have a Samsung S10+
Alexia
2023-06-12 04:00:51 +0000 UTCSo, the longest chapter yet at 40 pages, and this one is a little different from the previous ones in that it focuses a little more on characters other than Serren. Also, in case you are a fan, our old friend Asryn makes his first appearance. It's taken a little while to get him in the comic, but this will not be his last time showing up in these pages.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-06-09 04:17:26 +0000 UTC
