Seduction Chapter 10
Added 2023-01-04 05:01:00 +0000 UTCBuck faces a difficult decision. Should he reveal his true identity to the man he loves, even if it may mean the end of their relationship?
Comments
Be sure that the story you wrote matches your intent. And I think it is a great and nice TG story and I fully understand why Buck hesitated to tell the truth. I just have the feeling that the pace is a little bit slow currently, but this is just fine tuning. Thank for sharing your insights, it was an interesting reading.
Alexia
2023-01-08 00:40:56 +0000 UTCThis coming week will be Brother Bewitched, then the week after Seduction.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-01-05 18:23:47 +0000 UTCAnd when will chapter 11 be?
Jacen Moore
2023-01-05 16:16:37 +0000 UTCWell stay tuned for Chapter 11! We will learn the answers to both questions!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-01-05 02:30:41 +0000 UTCPacing is always a challenge. I felt like it would be difficult for Buck to admit who he really was, and I didn't want to gloss over it. To me, there are two issues for him: One is his lingering shame that he, formerly an alpha male, has found himself not only a submissive female, but in love with a man he once went up against mano a mano. One he considered a worthy but inferior adversary. Secondly, he is afraid of rejection from the man he now loves. So, I felt it would be hard for him to confess and, to me, there should be some tension and drama in him making the choice. Buck is making what will be a life changing decision, letting himself be vulnerable and putting his future happiness in the hands of Warren! Just explaining my thoughts. I never seek to deny a reader's right to react to the story as they will. As always, I do thank you for your feedback.
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-01-05 02:28:56 +0000 UTCWonder if the support agents are gonna do anything to the hero anymore or if the bad guy is gonna do something to him now that he knows the truth
Shaun Foraker
2023-01-05 02:24:34 +0000 UTCIt's a nice story but maybe it should progress a little bit faster? This whole episode is just about the hero hesitating to tell the truth.
Alexia
2023-01-05 01:27:43 +0000 UTCAgreed!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-01-04 16:01:17 +0000 UTCDAWWWWW 😍 😍
Jacen Moore
2023-01-04 13:26:39 +0000 UTCTheir plan has gone a little bit off the rails!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-01-04 08:32:07 +0000 UTCWow! One wonders if the Costume Shop may regret it…
Belle
2023-01-04 05:58:07 +0000 UTCThanks! I uploaded the wrong file. It should work now!
Taylor Galen Kadee
2023-01-04 05:46:20 +0000 UTCHi! The file isn't saved as a PDF because the computer thinks the file type is .comiclife. Just thought I should let you know!
CallSignElle
2023-01-04 05:28:01 +0000 UTC
