Hospitality 41
Added 2022-09-10 02:38:17 +0000 UTCAnd there you have it.
I cannot express the sheer amount of gratitude I have for every single one of you who supported me while making this comic. Real life got a bit hectic during the life of this comic, what with catching covid, the Texas freeze, being forced to move from my last apartment, etc. But we made it, and I can say there are many lessons to be learned. A couple off the top of my head;
-My background skills are painfully lacking and I promise I will learn to draw a bedroom before the next comic
-I need to not swap and experiment with lineart brushes when making what should be one consistent body of work
-The plot had a few in-flight changes made to it, and although I'm mostly pleased with where we ended up, the final comic differed dramatically from what I originally wrote. As stated previously, I'll be working with an established writer on future comics
I would like to know what you think. On a scale of 1 to 10 how pleased were you with Hospitality? And crucially, if it's not a 10, what could I do in the future to make it a 10? If you chose a 10, great, thumbs up, glad to give you a boner, but I'm really interested in finding the gaps in my skill set and hammering them out before starting the next big project.
Love yall
Siroc
Comments
Damn the blue eyed one got some knockers on her love to see a panel of Nick tapping all of them in shorts but mostly her lol.
darkshadowfang
2022-09-15 21:14:47 +0000 UTCFor me, I give this one a 10. I thought the story was actually consistent the whole way through, loved the art and have to say I’ve loved watching the styles change and improve as you’ve gone on, and the content was just 🤌
FunInNature
2022-09-13 14:59:45 +0000 UTChe gonna be drained after this lol
Wretched Spawn
2022-09-13 05:47:07 +0000 UTCGreat story, I only wish we got to see a last page of them all preggers with his pups
Master Sparrow
2022-09-12 00:30:38 +0000 UTCI hope there be a physical copies of these sexy comics cuz I love them so much
Naz
2022-09-12 00:15:17 +0000 UTCThis is totally one of my favorite comics.
LeFalleneur1
2022-09-11 06:16:14 +0000 UTCI give the Art a 10/10, it just looks great and despite the very own art style it came very close to the original beloved characters. The story was a 9/10, I mean the characters were great and the Humor was hilarious. But at least for my taste it was a bit too long around the middle or the beginning, it feels a bit like you started to write an entire different story right in the middle. It was still a very nice story, but i felt like on a too long leach while following it (makes that sense? In germany we have this saying "an der langen Leine führen" but I dont know if it makes sense in english :D ) Also 9/10 for the smutt, real good smutt! Sexy and jerkable! I would give the full 10, there is just a small little detail, that more like a 0,1 ... to me the fluits seem kinda generic? They still look great, but after I have seen the first cum its like seeing the very same load over and over again. But as I said it still looks great! To be serious, the only thing I really missed here were some pregnant bunnies ^^
Akataja
2022-09-10 23:06:30 +0000 UTCI hope he does more Haida x Fenneko
churchontime
2022-09-10 21:07:59 +0000 UTC10/10 I haven't looked forward to something this much in ages
aj
2022-09-10 20:26:19 +0000 UTCI would give it a solid 10/10. Best so far with Pretend I’m Her coming second. Suggestion for environmental work, keep them simple. What you had here is perfect since your style is cartoony and simple already. The main focus between the subject and the environment is that subject takes priority. If your subjects became more detailed, maybe add more objects in your environment but so far, what you did for the sisters’ encounters with Nick was great enough. Don’t go overboard or you’ll lose focus of the scene.
inCawhoots
2022-09-10 20:05:43 +0000 UTCThis whole review speaks everything I wish I could put into words myself
Boaty McBoatface
2022-09-10 16:40:59 +0000 UTCSuch a great storry look forward for more 9/10 as you seam to get better and better
Phoenix Behemoth
2022-09-10 13:14:16 +0000 UTCI great way to end, it definitely leaves it open if you ever wanted to expand on it or do a second story 😊💙💙💙
Sean Russ
2022-09-10 11:26:53 +0000 UTCDefinitely like a 9 or 9.5, the story was good and I didn't notice about the bedroom until you pointed it out, but I do agree either a bit more drama or story would've done wonders to it. I like the "action" but I feel like some story or foreplay before are also good. I also wouldn't mind you exploring other fandoms or ideas that aren't Zootopia
RodaMoon
2022-09-10 08:40:59 +0000 UTCDefinitely top 3 comics you've done so far!
Cloud Blitzer
2022-09-10 08:32:18 +0000 UTCWe're gonna need a bigger boat... Quick! Judy and the 5 original horny bunnies, strap on these dildos and start pegging as many of your sisters as you can.
RJ
2022-09-10 08:24:23 +0000 UTC8/10. Biggest positives is the concept overall. You have a huge thing for male biased pornography, where dudes get lucky and have their way with the women, and the girls get submissive and lose themselves to the men. Misogynistic? Maybe, But it's a fantasy that's lacking these days and I love it. Nick is getting a harem, there's tension throughout the scenario, and it all works out in the end with Nick getting his rocks off for what seems like eternity (gotta have an MC with infinite stamina, after all). Another positive is the pacing. You really do care about the "how" and "why" of the sex, and it makes you way above anyone else. It's why I love good hentai in the first place. You can draw all the gorgeous anime girls you want; in the end, it comes down to why a relatable, self-insert dude gets the chance to have sex with them. Sex is a taboo subject we are all insecure about, and it takes months if not years to gain the trust of someone to consent to the act. It should take time. And that time creates tension, this making the sex even hotter. My gripes, although minor, have to be the quality of the art? You're doing a lot here so I totally get that you have to make compromises. But I swear, the anatomy work on the bunny girls got simplified compared to, say, how Judy looked in Backseat Bargain. When Judy strips in front of Finnick, you see the perfect definition of her ribcage, chest, and breasts just express the best of a feminine figure can possibly be. The rib cage, the chest, the breasts - it just explodes off the screen like the opening of the gates of heaven. When Judy strip in the last few pages of Hospitality, the reveal isn't as impactful. I could be alone on this one, but I did love how you drew feminine figures before. The gap of reasoning between "cheating tension" and consensual reveal was kind of out of nowhere, considering how you've built this stuff up for 4 comics? I get Judy and Nick may have come to an understanding of having an open relationship, and I am totally for a relieving conclusion that Judy and Nick can now freely fuck whoever they want, it was just how it was executed. Not sure how you could've done it better without, you know, MAKING EVEN MORE ZOOTOPIA COMICS. But I think when it comes to twists or revelations, build up to them a little bit more to make readers a bit more satisfied about it. Maybe you should've shown Nick or Judy get suspicious or aware that something was going on, THEN when Judy reveals the truth it cohesively makes sense. I... guess that's it? I am insanely thankful a furry porn artist like you exists. You find the perfect, flawless balance between the saturday night cartoon stylization that originates with these IPs, while making sure you exaggerate the elements that make these characters hot, sexy, and cute without going way too far down another style that kills the reason why we find these characters attractive in the first place. You get a lot of criticism for being too "perverted" or "toxic", but that's what I like about your stuff. It reminds me of early 2000s porn when artists didn't give a shit about being perverted or expressing the deep-down lust a straight dude carries. Keep up the good work.
Tim
2022-09-10 07:31:52 +0000 UTC10/10, another brilliant comic. cannot wait to see what the next comic holds.
Faraxsis89
2022-09-10 07:05:41 +0000 UTC10/10 can we get one shot of the brown busty one please a tit job woulb be great
Xiant
2022-09-10 06:42:35 +0000 UTCHonestly dude 10/10 it was great! I love your art style, I loved the twist in the comic and damn you did an awesome job with Judy's sisters. I genuinely don't know how could you have done it better...
Obsidian
2022-09-10 06:37:14 +0000 UTC9/10 A very good comic! Unfortunately, I'm a bit sad that there weren't any cute hybrid babies here! It was not even shown whether one or more sisters were pregnant. Unfortunately, that was missing here for a perfect ending. That's why unfortunately only 9/10 for an otherwise very well made story! I wish or hope for the following for the future: 1) That Nick makes more cute hybrid babies (with for example Mrs Hopps, Mrs Otterton, Judy's sisters...), 2) that the different stories will eventually be linked. 3) That Judy will also get pregnant (whether intentionally or unintentionally). Would just be fair. 4) Because of the sequels to the other Zootopia stories. For example, because of Mrs Otterton, I hope that she either leaves her husband and becomes Nick's secret lover or at least that Mr Otterton is only allowed to watch in the future. But both of them, especially Mr Otterton, find it very cool 5) I hope Judy and Finnick meet again. I really liked the parts where Judy was dominated by Finnick. And if the two meet again, Judy will give in to her lust this time and submit to Finnick (and hopefully, whether voluntarily or not, Judy will be impregnated by Finnick)
Gambit
2022-09-10 06:32:58 +0000 UTCNick must be bloody exhausted by the end of all this! 🤣
SonOfAngron
2022-09-10 06:21:27 +0000 UTCWow, quite the long ride, but definitely a very very enjoyable one. I'd rate Hospitality 8 out of 10, especially in the beginning I was a bit put off by the implications of Nick betraying Judy. Especially because he seemed to know that it would be very wrong. Also, the last chapter felt very fast compared to the main act. I get that the point of the comic was a big bunny bunga bunga but I personally prefer less characters and more time for the story and "story" to unfold. But it was still a great comic and your selection of bunny waifus was great, each and every one looked beautiful and sexy in their own way. Keep up the great work and, just so you know, I see nothing wrong with your backgrounds. 😁
Scout Charger
2022-09-10 05:58:22 +0000 UTC10 👍🏼
Randochi
2022-09-10 05:14:11 +0000 UTCOut of curiosity, what was the original plot that was planned?
DukeJahu311
2022-09-10 05:13:51 +0000 UTC8/10 It's a great addition to the various Zoop comics. Skillset gaps I kinda noticed (but it was all still good bro, don't hate yourself fr) was a few things I'll list here: -Maybe some more work on establishing shots & room design? like you had some nice rooms in the beginning and kinda streamlined the later settings a little too much. -You bringing in a writer and/or hammering out a more set-in-stone story would also help and you noticing these things is a good sign, reading this comic from front to back again does make it a bit apparent the script was tweaked a little but it ended in a great place and we are all happy. Like you are improving mister, looking back on your old work and your work now makes that plain to see, and I have no doubt your next comic will be another step up. -Only other point I can think of rn is to please don't lose your drawing aesthetic, I and everyone I have spoken to like your style and within the boundaries of improvement obviously please don't drastically come out with say a committed lineart style that's a little too different from what we have come to like. Now yes I agree you did use some diff brushes liberally but please don't go goblin mode and come out with a drastically different style bubs, we all love you and your aesthetic uwu. sorry for the long but since not many people here seemed to try and give feedback I thought I would try and give some at least. Great comic and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you for the respectable and non-hurtful story direction too lol Love ya work man, be well
Reynard
2022-09-10 04:31:51 +0000 UTCHonestly yeah but out boy here is a Female & Male specialist
Reynard
2022-09-10 04:18:19 +0000 UTCHmmm... I'd say it's an 11 out of 10. Better than I'd predicted it could be. Only way I could see it better is if Judy got some more action or her parents joined in.
Maplesoftfox
2022-09-10 04:14:15 +0000 UTCNick getting to do some of Judy's brothers would have taken this to 11! 🤣
Radio Ardilla
2022-09-10 03:56:27 +0000 UTC8 of 10 over all it was Nice but some parts got kind of glossed over. but over all damn good. cant wait for more stuff from ya.
Tigerchris
2022-09-10 03:53:47 +0000 UTCgreat comic. 9/10 for me. would like to have seen it go longer but it ended well. i hope to see a sequel in the future and i hope to see more comics.
vectors1
2022-09-10 03:43:02 +0000 UTC9 of 10 Some things in the plot felt off. Otherwise really good. Cant wait for more zootopia stuff
Niclasini
2022-09-10 03:41:12 +0000 UTC10 But... I was really hoping the end wasn't for a long while, still. This has been the best comic yet! & it hurts more to see it's ending.
VulpisPomf
2022-09-10 03:37:06 +0000 UTCpurple eyes in the back left knows what's up and wants in
Frenzy the Bat
2022-09-10 03:28:46 +0000 UTCSo sad it is over. I hope there is another comic soon so I'll have a reason to stay subscribed.
Sobana
2022-09-10 03:22:00 +0000 UTCIf the fact that you drew it is taken into account. All of them will be pregnant.
Black Spruce
2022-09-10 03:15:55 +0000 UTCMy god that blue eyed yellow beauty! <3
Zealot
2022-09-10 03:06:04 +0000 UTCSE-QUEL! SE-QUEL! SE-QEUL!
Nividust
2022-09-10 03:00:23 +0000 UTCIt's been a pleasure and a honor. On to the next adventure
Roberto Bernal
2022-09-10 02:56:36 +0000 UTCLet's be honest, nick will be fucking his way out of this
toby coan
2022-09-10 02:54:52 +0000 UTCGazelle x Finnick?
churchontime
2022-09-10 02:49:11 +0000 UTCI really enjoyed this one. It doesn't have to always be about drama, I like the ideal that nick and Judy are comfortable enough and love each other enough to have other partners and still fuck each other's brains out when it's one on one. 10 out of 10 easily. I enjoy your work and look forward to more.
Mr.Black
2022-09-10 02:47:08 +0000 UTCDefinitely a 9/10. I don't think anything is perfect, even the Master Frank Frazetta, and contemporaries like Hideyaki Amano have their shortcomings. But what you have done here is in the same way to their art, remarkable.
Jordan Christopher Sullivan
2022-09-10 02:45:54 +0000 UTCI'm always happy to see Nick and Judy art/comics, and the story was as simple and easy to understand before the surprise. I want to give it a 10 but I'll choose 9. The reason I went with 9 out of 10 is for what you already stated: You're going to work on the Why rather than When/How characters have sex in your comics. This is biased of course, but I've recently leaned towards comics and stories that focus on the reason a couple gets intimate. That said, I've never had more satisfied boners than with Hospitality (excluding Operation Housecall). Can't wait to see more!
Neestar
2022-09-10 02:45:41 +0000 UTCPersonally, I loved Hospitality. It was an original idea I’ve never seen before and I loved that it didn’t have any NTR or anything like that. I give it a definite 8.5 out of 10. The ways it would’ve been a 10, at least in my opinion, I would’ve made it a bit longer since there were quite a few characters in it and I would’ve liked each one to be fleshed out a bit more. I enjoy plot just as much as I enjoy the sex. I liked the way it all wrapped together though so thanks for the amazing comic journey. Cheers Siroc :)
Josh Sosa
2022-09-10 02:44:00 +0000 UTCIt looks great! Delivered as always! Wouldn’t mind seeing a couple bonus panels of the sleepless night down the road. ^.^
Diesel
2022-09-10 02:44:00 +0000 UTCI'd give it a 7 just cus I'm not into cheating witch is how it started out I'm assuming as the original idea, tho most of your comics are based around cheating, but the art was a nice improvement and lookin forward ro see what's next. Still hoping for a oc comic with Leigh
Mj111994
2022-09-10 02:43:51 +0000 UTCI love your artwork and stories a lot. Easily a 10. Can you tell me if you’re able to open up for commissioned artwork soon perhaps?
Taserdude
2022-09-10 02:43:40 +0000 UTCThis was amazing from start to finish thank you for all your time and hard work!!!
Jadelantern
2022-09-10 02:43:33 +0000 UTCSame bro! This made my night too
NettFox
2022-09-10 02:43:31 +0000 UTC10/10
Seth
2022-09-10 02:43:29 +0000 UTCI'd give it a 9, and only due to small detail. Like having more diversity with the characters. A few times I was confused on which character was which. Besides that, it was an amazing comic. Keep up the great work!
DerpishGamer
2022-09-10 02:43:17 +0000 UTCCalled it! And I’m glad I did.
Ricardo
2022-09-10 02:43:04 +0000 UTCAlso yes I scale this as 20 out of 10 XD Yet for real only criticism is I want more focus on the other gals than just a singular sister. Because was dying to see the rest in extended pages like Catherine.
NettFox
2022-09-10 02:41:52 +0000 UTCI'd give it a 9, just because everyone can improve.
The Fire Piper
2022-09-10 02:41:37 +0000 UTCEpic! Hope we get a few one shot pics of all these sisters down the line too! Sequel another time :3
NettFox
2022-09-10 02:41:28 +0000 UTCWell done. Good way to wrap this one up. Thanks for a wonderful comic.
James Thornton
2022-09-10 02:41:17 +0000 UTCDeath by SNU SNU
Luke Young
2022-09-10 02:40:06 +0000 UTC
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