Backseat Bargain 16
Added 2020-05-13 00:16:54 +0000 UTCSo I figured it was high time to ditch the handwritten dialogue since let's be honest, I don't have the prettiest handwriting, but also keeping it consistent is damn near impossible. Plus I'm told it's just much easier to read this way. What do y'all think?
Comments
For me is the other way around. Seeing the comic without dialogue spoils the full experience
dagafed
2020-05-13 03:02:24 +0000 UTCi like it keep it that way get more invested
Jonathan
2020-05-13 02:54:29 +0000 UTCMeh I like the surprise
Ztpia
2020-05-13 02:47:05 +0000 UTCSounds good. And hey, if there’s multiple choices you can’t decide between, maybe another poll is in order :)
ArtAnimationFan
2020-05-13 02:07:28 +0000 UTCThis is probably head-canon, but I've always imagined that Judy would act stuck-up around Finnic because she views him as a common con-fox and a toxic influence on Nick. The idea of Finnic kinda pulling her down a couple of notches by being rough and dirty with her and making her have to take it is quite appealing.
Stu Fox
2020-05-13 01:12:15 +0000 UTCAlright, I'll do some poking around and see what I can find and use before Friday :)
Siroc
2020-05-13 01:09:48 +0000 UTCThe font certainly is easier to read. But rather than Comic Sa- nah I'm just kidding, but rather than the font you're using, maybe find a font that's closer to your writing. I'm saying that because you handwriting mixed with the art carried a certain style to it that this font slightly contradicts.
ArtAnimationFan
2020-05-13 01:00:51 +0000 UTCAgain man, I have to agree, the "just doing it" mood is awesome. Although I wouldn't exactly say he's degrading her like that. I think it's more like teasing mixed with dirty talk.
ArtAnimationFan
2020-05-13 00:59:50 +0000 UTCall good homie
Siroc
2020-05-13 00:57:31 +0000 UTCyou're welcome
MillyDeer
2020-05-13 00:53:05 +0000 UTCthis isnt a preview though
dagafed
2020-05-13 00:48:57 +0000 UTCSorry, Siroc, I was so enraptured with the action that I only took a cursory glance at the font. I stand corrected. My apologies.
Stu Fox
2020-05-13 00:47:14 +0000 UTCFinnick: God damn, I'm gonna fill that bunny hole to the brim! Judy: Do you-ah! Really need to keep talking? Finnick: Kiss me. Judy: Huh? *muffled kissing noises* Finnick: Well, well, well, she IS into it! Judy: Oh my god, look, if it helps you get off faster, I'll play along! Finnick: Whatever you say, officer.
MillyDeer
2020-05-13 00:42:50 +0000 UTCIt's not comic sans!
Siroc
2020-05-13 00:37:21 +0000 UTCIt's not comic sans
Siroc
2020-05-13 00:36:15 +0000 UTCYeah using typset dialog is much better reading you can always make your own font to make it more distinct if you really want. And! You get the option of giving characters different fonts for personality reasons which can work awesome when done well.
DrBDiddly
2020-05-13 00:34:57 +0000 UTCWhat Trew said about Comic Sans. I'm still loving the fact Judy's "just doing it" as opposed to liking it. I hate the porn trope of the character not liking it, then liking it. Finnic degrading Judy as a fuck doll is more original than Judy suddenly being into it.
Stu Fox
2020-05-13 00:33:03 +0000 UTC,,i,- you
NilaPomf
2020-05-13 00:32:39 +0000 UTCspeaking of text, please release the dialogue for previews, even if only as text in a comment
dagafed
2020-05-13 00:32:03 +0000 UTCHot hot hot
MillyDeer
2020-05-13 00:30:39 +0000 UTCDahtii
2020-05-13 00:28:00 +0000 UTCthis text looks better in the non high resolution version
dagafed
2020-05-13 00:27:39 +0000 UTCThank you. It’s way easier now
Dahtii
2020-05-13 00:26:33 +0000 UTC
