The tidied version as promised, you can grab it here.
Notes
Caught a few typos
Smoothed out some of the prose I was unhappy with
Added a little descriptive narration about the throne room
Also, the picture is a crop from the sketches I got back from momdadno earlier today for the game's first MxM scene. They are looking very promising, and I hope those of you who are here for the gay content are really going to enjoy them.