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The Northern Tyrant [Game of Thrones] Chapter 39 - The Advice, The Final Feast & The King’s Mind

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This story just keeps getting better and better.I'm always looking forward to reading more.

GrayGhost

Comment during the reading: it’s nice to see that he is really friends with Robert that it’s not just for the money finally I have the impression with what is happening, it puts some lead in his head it’s nice as a discussion.

IsekaiMeInTVD

Without spoiling. All I can say is that secrets won't last forever.

MrPlotThickens

Okay. I like Robert here. This is good character work. Maybe its Wylis' somewhat modern standards, but I think he's your strongest protagonist, narratively. I think... you've done well on the non-smut character work. At the same time, I also want the AU snippet where Robert finds out about Lyanna and decides to end it right there, in Ramsgate.

PainfirePurist

Tftc

Razvan Peles

Cersei plaps plz

Gawain

Wow, and the promise of another chapter tomorrow. TFTC

Derisat

Agree on all points. Yeah.

MrPlotThickens

Good Chapter I believe that Id possible we need to show more of our other main players Ned Brandon Robert . The cannon has been shifted but each has their own struggles. One a Kingdom he never truly wanted Another a Lordship he never coveted Another A Father Mudered a Title lost and teaching for love and protect his remaining family. We need some time to pass so we can see the building and the relationships between Wylis and the northern lords. Love Wylis being top Dawg and keeping the ladies in his life busy but I feel we need to zoom out a bit well after he races to knock more sense into Robert. Real Talk I've had a good many of my army brothers on that cliff. The shit can take a part of your soul wondering if you had known or paid that extra attention

Delta Lightning

Tftc great job

travis btmb

Looking forward to seeing a robert that actually doesnt fall into depravity

Potato

great chapter as always

Shawn Morwood

To land a few more words into Robert's thick skull. It's kinda like a reflex. You just found out your good friend was suic-idal. Won't you wanna see their ugly mug again?

MrPlotThickens

Oooh cliffhanger! Great as usual, but why would Wylis need to race after Robert to save him, when the quest is showing that's he's already saved him?

Mac


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