Dudley Smut Potential Scene - New Writer (SMUT TEST) -Vote!

[A/N: I wanted to write more smut series, so I've been looking for smut writers to help me with the lewd parts so I can focus on the plots.

I found this new author, and she wrote this for the Smut segment of the Dudley X Susan Bones scene for the [Second Chances] series.

Personally, it was a mess when I started to edit it. So keep in mind that I put almost 40% additional work into this to make it readable.

But since it's already written, I'm going to leave the judgment to your keen eyes. I think she can do well in female POV-centric smuts. Sadly, we don't do that here.]

NOTE: The real Chapter 2 of Second Chances [The Dudley Story] will be posted later.

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One good thing about Hogwarts starting late was that booze was available. Not freely, but it was accessible through some ‘means’.

Dudley found himself staring at the tipsy Susan, sitting on the edge of the long students’ table in front of him. From his lower angle on the bench, he could see her slightly red cheeks and face.

Susan wore her black cloak loosely around her shoulders, her Hufflepuff tie knotted around her head like a headband as she stroked his inner thigh with her foot. Her eyes looked drowsy as she stared at him, her face flushed from the aftermath of drinking.

"So–" Dudley drawled, his voice softer than usual as he rested his hand gently on Susan’s knee, "you don’t do well with booze, do you? And yet… you still had some, and came looking for me… You either got guts, or just, you know… a need?”

Susan smirked, giving him a daring look as she wrapped her arms around his neck, tugging him closer. “Oh, you’ve got no idea. It was so much fun! You should have come… well, you still can… come.” 

She reached down, running her fingers through Dudley’s unruly hair. Her gaze lingered on his as if daring him to inch just a little closer. 

He did so, rather confidently. “I might just take you up on that offer.”

“Who’s stopping you?” Susan whispered back, a grin playing on her lips.

She leaned back, resting with her arms supporting her on the table, and placed her foot closer to his crotch.

Being Professor Vector’s favorite student had its perks. He had free access to the Arithmancy classroom at all times—just like now. Unsurprisingly, with so few people having an interest in that subject, it was like a private room for him at that late hour.

He withdrew his hand from trying to grab her thighs, dangling on the edge of the table and stared at Susan, letting her do what she wanted.

Her foot continued its tantalizing touch, toes tracing the obvious line of his growing bulge and sensually rubbing it up and down.

“Susan—” Dudley started, but before he could finish his sentence, she started removing her clothes. She slipped the cloak off her pale shoulders and then removed everything else underneath it—Shirt, skirt, panties, and bra.

She leaned back a little more, showing off her perky nipples, as her chest moved up and down with each heated breath. Dudley took his time to admire what she let him, his gaze taking in everything, from her perfectly formed breasts down to the pink petals that glistened with her juices. 

“Bones—” 

“Shh…”

She widened her legs and leaned down, pulling him closer by his necktie, silencing him with a demanding and bruising kiss. Dudley responded eagerly, leaning closer between her legs as their lips crashed together. This wasn’t their first, after all.

She tilted her head slightly, deepening the kiss, their tongues rubbing together and slick with spit. 

With each sweep of her tongue against his, he felt his arousal intensify, the primal thirst coiling inside him, threatening to consume him entirely. 

Every small nip and bite against Susan’s lips caused her to release soft, involuntary noises of pleasure as they continued to fight for dominance with their tongues. 

His hand twitched, wanting to touch her soft peaks, however, her hands acted swiftly, seizing his wrists with force, holding them above his head in the air. 

“Mhm… Keep… It… There…”  she said in between kisses. 

Dudley’s cock throbbed with excitement at the thought of being restrained, the eagerness in his loins continued to push him, and the craving intensified. For a moment, the image of her pleasuring herself on his rock-hard erection while he simply watched with utter pleasure was simply intoxicating. 

“Let’s get you out of these, shall we?”

Don’t need to tell me twice. Dudley stood up and took off all his clothes, throwing them all to the floor with no care at all.

“Fuck.”

His body immediately shuddered as Susan came down from the table. She knelt in front of him and grabbed the base of his throbbing cock. Her thumb traced teasing circles into the heated, sensitive head of his cock. 

His precum started to slowly dribble down, the clear liquid wetting her fingers while she leaned in again. Her face got closer and closer as her fingers danced on his length, teasing his hunger. With muffled moans, Susan effectively trapped his aching, large cock between her fingers.

This… is torture. Dudely couldn’t help leaning back a bit, his hands grabbing hold of the table behind him. He allowed her to do as she pleased, trying hard not to move an inch as she asked. But he couldn’t entirely, his hips wanting to move so fucking badly.

Dudley thrust against her small fingers, his hips moving shamelessly. Each movement squeezed out more precum from his eager length, the clear fluid sliding down his hard shaft in glistening rivulets. 

The pleasure made him feel like he could climax from this contact alone, like a horny teenager whose cock erupted with the slightest touch. Yet, he wanted more, understanding that he wouldn't waste this opportunity, not when there wasn’t a single thread of clothing on Susan’s luscious body.

"Need… More," he breathed out, his gaze locked onto her lust-filled eyes, a plea in his voice. 

"Eager, huh?" she said, her voice oozing with seductive authority.

With that, her face drew closer. Her blushing lips parted, replacing the fingers as the shimmering lips slid above his sensitive cock head, and slowly down his girthy shaft. 

Dudley’s knees buckled, his fingers instinctively gripping the study table even harder. Oh, fuck. 

Her lips continued to suck, taking him all inside, all the way to her throat from the very first plunge. Her tongue slithered inside, caressing his hard, throbbing manhood. It was a thorough massage from the beginning, not an inch of him was left untouched. The sensation went from his thick shaft to his toes as she bobbed her head up and down rhythmically.

Her hands came up to grip his thighs, pushing back from him as she let the cock spring free from that hard suck with a loud pop. 

“Liking what you see?” she moaned as she licked the tip like a lollipop. 

The sight was sexy; too sexy for him to hold back.

"I like it... Like begging to be fucked," he whispered, his lips brushing teasingly against her hardened nipple as he made her stand up between his legs, lifting her up by his hand wrapped around her neck.

She eagerly complied, arching her chest forward, letting him thoroughly taste her soft flesh. 

But Dudley wanted more, craving for greater satisfaction. He wanted to feel, to experience a pleasure that bordered on pain.

Dudley stopped suckling her and got on top of the table and completely laid down flat. Then he pulled her by the wrist, guiding her to straddle him.

Giggling, she sat down on his belly, sliding her body upward until she was sitting on his chest, the plump pink lips of her needy pussy dripping right in front of his eyes. 

"What?" Dudley asked, bewildered.

“Tell me you weren’t thinking about this-uh,” she moaned in the last part, staring down at his smirking face so close to her core. 

"Turn around," he ordered with a commanding tone.

She lifted onto her knees and maneuvered her body until she was facing his legs along with that magnificent standing shaft. Her ass and pussy, enticingly exposed, hovered dangerously close to his face.

"Umm… As great as the first time." His hands found their place on her asscheeks, gripping them firmly. He exerted a subtle yet insistent pull, coaxing her backward until she was straddling his face. 

He inhaled her scent like a man in hunger and gave a sturdy, long lick once, twice, and thrice earning loud moans. He continued to swirl his tongue, round and round, circling her clit as she quickly got to wrap her lips around his cock in return. 

The sensation drew a deep groan of pleasure from Dudley through his mouth, trembling on her lower lips. Dudley continued to match her movements with his licks but he got too greedy. He found himself consumed by an insatiable hunger for her sweet pussy as he worshiped every inch of it with his tongue. 

“Ohhh, so good, Dudley…” she moaned loudly.

Feeling the pleasurable tremors, Susan started to suck even harder. Taking him all the way in and out, deep into her throat. Without a warning, she also tickled his balls, caressing them with her wet, glistening fingers. 

That elicited a deep, wanton groan from him. 

“Ugh!”

His tongue continued with the skillful licking and teasing, his mouth creating loud, slurping noises in perfect rhythm with the gagging and squelching sounds that escaped from her throat.

His skilled fingers slid into her spit-slicked hole alongside his tongue, entering with ease. She had been thoroughly stimulated by the vigorous job, and now it felt like a passionate competition, a battle of pleasure that pushed them to see who could draw out the most tantalizing moans from the other.

The sensations from Susan’s throat became overwhelming. His cock in her mouth fell out as she let out a loud, lust-filled moan, conceding defeat in their little contest. He continued his relentless assault on her pussy, his fingers plunged into her hole while his tongue tirelessly licked and teased the reddening bud.

"Don’t stop," Dudley ordered, his words laced with a heated breath.

Without hesitation, she took the head into her mouth and sucked vigorously, as if challenging him for another round.

Instantly reacting, he pushed his hips upward, driving roughly half of his cock into her throat, causing her to gag momentarily before pulling back, coughing, and catching her breath.

"Mhm,” Susan groaned in slight protest but didn’t stop his hips from seeking out pleasure. 

Dudley simply chuckled beneath her, spreading her cheeks even further apart. Each tantalizing movement had her shivering and trembling on top of him. He gradually increased the pace, thrusting deeper into her mouth. His cock moved in a rhythm he couldn’t control. He felt her thighs clench around his head, locking him in place. 

“Mmph…” She moaned through his thrusts.

Every time his finger fucked her pussy, her pleasure grew and she was so lost in the ecstasy of the moment that forgot to move at all. She kept her mouth there, letting him fuck her face to his desire.

"Enough, enough!" Susan pulled her mouth up and struggled to move from his hands that were tightly wrapped around her thighs. 

Dudley gave a final lick and let her go for a brief moment when she shifted the position—moving to the floor, on top of their discarded clothes. 

She knelt on all fours and looked behind, her eyes gleaming with desperation—her hair all over the place but that tie held the strands securely. 

Both of them were a panting mess. 

“Eager, huh?” Dudley repeated her own words with a teasing voice. Quickly, he took position behind her and aimed straight for the goal. That tight, juicy, rosy pussy.

“Oh!” She shuddered when she felt Dudley teasingly rubbing the tip of his dripping cock against her slick entrance as he leaned into her from the rear. 

His weight pressed her down harder, keeping her ass raised, but her front fully pressed underneath on the floor, her face sideways. He then firmly gripped her nape, preventing her from moving, and with deliberate slowness, he pushed his cock into her stretched, firmly finger-fucked hole.

“Want me to go harder, Bones?”

“Yeh-Yes!” A low moan escaped her lips as the first breach sent a sharp twinge of pain up her spine. His size was such that even after taking her delicate virginity, she always felt like a virgin under him. 

The tightness and angle of their position amplified the sensation, making it even more intense as he slowly slid his whole length in.

"Fuck." He cussed out as he felt her wet walls hug him. 

She looked behind at the man who hovered over her, sweat glistening on his large form, his muscular, heavy arms that held her neck. She remained still, allowing him a moment to adjust. 

Susan’s pussy clenched around the massive intrusion, and she felt herself getting impaled to the hilt. Minutes felt like an eternity as her lower stomach tightened in arousal. The sensation of his thick length lodged deep inside her, the veins nudging against her inner walls, sent waves of unadulterated pleasure coursing through her entire being. Her thighs spread apart even wider, ass raised, back arched, face pressed onto the floor accommodating the fullness with a needy response. 

It was too much that she could hardly contain herself. 

“Please…” she couldn’t help but moan out her need, a need for him to move, do something!

“Please what, Bones?” Dudley toyed playfully.

“F-Fuck me hard! Just… move that damn cock!”

He chuckled and tightened his grip around her neck, and slowly, he began to pull his cock back out, leaving only the tip nestled inside. 

The feeling of that thick girth retreating, the veins dragging deliciously along her walls on their way out, every inch that left her was met with a soft moan from her, Susan’s hips instinctively trying to follow Dudley’s retreat, yearning for the return of that delicious fullness. 

"You're asking for it…” He muttered and went in.

Her soft moans quickly escalated into a symphony of filthy, wanton sounds as Dudley plunged back inside without giving her a moment to think. 

His fingers removed themselves from her neck and dug into the sweat-slicked skin of her ass, their grip tightening, further asserting his control as he picked up the pace. His thrusts became increasingly insistent, clapping against her flesh in waves. His shaft expertly targeted that sensitive spot deep within her, pulling her ever closer to the edge of ecstasy.

Inevitably, the pleasure became overwhelming, and she found herself teetering on the edge. Her body tensed, her moans growing louder as she could no longer hold back. 

"I’m coming… I—I’m… Ohh!" She moaned as wave after wave of intense pleasure coursed through her. The convulsions and the spasms left her breathlessly oozing her sweet, sweet nectar, drenching all his magnificent length for more slippery access.

"You can't be done already…" Dudley whispered, his thrusts turned relentless as he continued to impale Susan with his thick length. “I’m not even close.”

She panted heavily, her breast heaving underneath as she slowly started to come down from the intense climax. But Dudley showed no signs of stopping, determined to keep the pleasure on both of them.

The overwhelming feeling pulsed through her tightly wound body, threatening to engulf her entirely. Her sensitive walls turned swollen, ripe, and delicate. 

“Aaaah! Yes, yes… fuck, this is why I like you, Dursley! This is why… that fucking cock! B-Best… Ah!” She mumbled mindlessly.

He pierced deeply, stretching her pussy so widely around the massive erection. He loved it all, her depth that could swallow him whole, her tightness that made him shudder.

"Endure it, Bones," Dudley whispered. “Almost there!”

The delicious pain of overstimulation gradually transformed into jolts of pleasure for Susan. Her amazing, large breasts acted like cushions underneath, supporting more of her lover’s weight on her back.

Dudley continued to pound into her, each movement pushing himself deep inside, hitting all the right spots as he almost rested flat on her back, eclipsing her frame. She was rendered speechless, her attempts at words transformed into moans as his hard thrusts repeatedly struck against her most sensitive spot inside, sending waves of ecstasy rippling through her body.

She could do nothing but take the relentless onslaught of pleasure that he was giving out, embracing the overstimulation as she continued to be relentlessly fucked without a single moment of rest following her first orgasm. 

But the sensation. She felt her walls clenching one more time at the pressure and his hold on her. 

Her second orgasm overwhelmed her, striking like lightning and sending shockwaves of pleasure on her trembling body. She arched desperately on his cock, completely consumed by the intense pleasure. 

In Dudley’s firm grasp, she convulsed, her pussy clenching and releasing in rhythm with his pace. Her mind was a haze of ecstasy, unable to focus on anything except the pleasure. 

“Mhm…”

"Dudley..." she moaned.

“Ugh! Where?” Dudley asked.

“In me!” Susan pleaded, her gasping voice barely escaping under his weighted thrusts. “A-All of it… I fucking love i-it! Mmm oh! Yes, that hot potion… spill it all in me… fill me, baby!”

Dudley couldn’t hold back after hearing her sensual request. He suddenly became still, his cock shoved inside in, buried as deep as possible within her clenching, thoroughly fucked, and spent heat. He sensed the pulsating throbs ooze from his balls, traveling through the length of his shaft, and then reaching the tip. 

He rested all his weight completely on her back, keeping himself squeezed deep when the first, mind-numbing spray of cream escaped. 

Followed by another, then a few more. He jolted on her back, hugging her with arms around her neck, holding her face up, his lips kissing her naked, pristine pale shoulder and neck between her sweaty red hair. His hips landed a few thrusts on their own to ooze out those last few drops. 

The warmth of her insides and his seed combined was just a sensation to live for. 

“Ooooh!” She felt the incredible fullness, filled with his cock, and the warmth of his climax flooding inside her. Her legs trembled even more, straight and spread under him. She longed to relax, but he continued to hold her head up, hugged around her neck.

“Ah…” Dudley moaned for the final time before pulling out completely. The gooey mess leaked out right after, spilling between her creamy thighs, where he also squeezed his calming cock to rest. 

“Turn around.”

He sat back on his knees and gave her space to turn. But as soon as she rested flat on her back, he settled on her again, his knees spreading her legs wide, his almost flaccid cock pulsating on her messy, sticky pussy. 

“Still drunk?” He asked, staring at her large breasts that despite being pulled into her by gravity, looked perky and voluptuous. The pink nipples made him lick his lips. But more than that, her flushed face, half open eyes made him hard again. He loved every second spent with Susan Bones. 

“Umh…” Susan raised her arms and hugged Dudley, pulling him onto her so she could kiss his lips. “Hmm… from booze? No. From your… seed… Oh, yessss~”

“You’re in luck. I got another shot for you.” Dudley teased her as he started to gyrate his hips, rubbing his slowly regrowing cock on her pussy. “What say, Bones? In for another round?”

“Oooh~” Susan rubbed her hands all over his wide back. He wasn’t the most muscular guy she knew, but he was large-framed and fit. Having him over her, pressing her down felt like the best hug in the world. “I-uh… Isn’t this why you have… Um-oh… Unrestricted access to my most desired body?”

He truly did. It was a deal between them since Hufflepuff got boring at times. Being able to entertain each other in the craziest way was just amazing. 

“I’m going in.” 

“Welcome back.” She giggled and clenched her teeth. Her sensitivity had peaked, and as she felt his cock slide back in her gently, it became hard to stay awake. 

Knock! Knock!

“Are you guys serious? When will you learn to lock the door?”

Dudley looked towards the door with a big grin, keeping himself balls deep inside Susan. “Oh, look at this shameless girl.”

“Hehe…” Susan also looked, feeling so thoroughly full and embraced underneath him. “Hannah, we know you touch yourself while listening to both of us. You know what, take a seat and enjoy the live show—oh!”

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