Max In trouble pg 2
Added 2016-09-25 04:52:43 +0000 UTCSecond page
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Looks good... Just two minor dialogue tweaks to suggest, in the last panel, that ok? Also will note you about the other item I was talking about tomorrow. I've just been crazy busy! First tweak [Max]: Hey! You (swapped) my craft materials for (the) contest with your cosplay costumes! Second tweak [JJ]: Don't worry, (you'll) still participate in (the) contest... in some way.
DarkJade
2016-09-30 22:32:31 +0000 UTC
