Kaz Comic 1 (Title pending)
Added 2017-11-30 17:12:07 +0000 UTCOkay, here it is!
I hope you like it!
This is a big test, so, please let me know your comments, critiques, etc : D
I want to make sure it's easy to understand, and if there are any typos or grammar mistakes haha (since you may know english is not my first language). Any suggestions and feedback is greatly welcome!
Speaking of suggestions, I'm going to make a poll regarding the name/title for this, I have some ideas in mind, some words I like, but feel free to suggest away and I'll include them later in the poll!
Some possible names, titles, etc that I have in mind are things related to, hipster girl, cameras/photos, coffee, abnormal/mysterious stuff, etc.
Say, Freckles & Frapuccinos, Through the Thick Fake Glasses (or just Thick Fake Glasses), Ginger Macchiato (though I hear ginger can be offensive in some regions?), Star Glasses, Moka-scented Visuals, Fame Frame, and so on XD I think you may get the idea.
Comments
I rather like the ring of "Fame Frame"; it's a fun alliterative rhyme, and "frame" could refer to both glasses and framing an image. Though it does lack the aspect of spirit photography (intentional JoJo reference there), as well as being a common acronym. Perhaps something like "Paranormal Fame Frame" or Fame Frame Files". As a side note, I dig the subtle freckles dotted around the rest of her body.
Kage Ryu 「カゲリュ」
2017-12-01 03:37:19 +0000 UTCHeyyyy I really like the "Negative" key word there, it makes a lot of sense hahaha, hmmm..! I'll keep that in mind~ thank you~!
Paroro
2017-12-01 00:33:06 +0000 UTCHm... There's quite heavy focus on the hipster themes in a lot of those, huh? Through the Thick Fake Glasses sounds like it could be interesting if things are likely to take a more Alice in Wonderland/Through the Looking Glass feel. "Ghost in the Frame" sprung to mind, but that might be a little on the nose, and I feel like I've heard it somewhere (although I wasn't able to find anything too related googling it just now) Or possibly something like "Negative Medium" or "Spirit Negative". Ooh ooh. Or "Sepia-natural" ... I'm getting carried away
Naomi Dusk
2017-11-30 23:06:23 +0000 UTCInteresting... Twilight is a word that does fit the theme too.. hmm
Paroro
2017-11-30 21:57:20 +0000 UTCFor the title,"Twilight" comes to mind, which is the invisible world that overlaps with ours where ghosts exist in the World of Darkness RPG systems. So something like "Shades of/from the Twilight" "A glimpse of the twilight"
Leon Whitestar
2017-11-30 19:53:06 +0000 UTCAaaaahhhh <3
Leon Whitestar
2017-11-30 19:47:05 +0000 UTCO hey your using my poll idea x)~! I do like the Fame Frame name best so far tba
PeriPeri
2017-11-30 18:13:22 +0000 UTC
