Sketch - The Crawling City - 39
Added 2017-07-13 21:06:23 +0000 UTCSketch for the upcoming one ´ w´ )
Is it confusing? Should I make Aria's blank mind/stare more noticeable? hahaha, hope you like it!
Comments
yea i'd say less smile, or more smile and more dead eyes? (blank pupils?)
Cleo Olsson
2017-07-14 19:52:38 +0000 UTCMaybe make the swirl more predominate.
LeRezwarrior
2017-07-14 06:56:17 +0000 UTCOh gods yes Aria in an apron. I mean, not the best context, considering what might be going on here. But adorable as an outfit. Also it was noticeable for me that she has a blank stare. Though color would make it more obvious. Though it's generally easy to pick up if your draw eyes a certain way and your audience is used to that, and for scenes like this, the eyes stray from the original style, usually with less detail/highlights. But for new audiences, and for styles like this comic where your eye style is simple to begin with, it'll probably read better to go with the standard swirl or blank/gradient eye with no pupil. Which it seems you're going with the former anyway.
Kage Ryu 「カゲリュ」
2017-07-13 23:24:38 +0000 UTCI think if keep the swirling eyes it will be fine, that will be noticeable when colored instead of changing it
PeriPeri
2017-07-13 21:55:46 +0000 UTCLol! I was a little confused. Maybe make the blank stare a little more obvious!
Versus
2017-07-13 21:35:29 +0000 UTCHi Brad, I missed you
Paroro
2017-07-13 21:17:27 +0000 UTCHi, I'm Brad too. Other than that, it looks great.
Ugochi
2017-07-13 21:11:12 +0000 UTC
