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EARLY RELEASE: Yoga Teaching Technique Blog

Hey all,

I've never done this before, but I thought it'd be in the spirit of Patreon to show you an article I wrote before I publish it. There are still a few books that need proper citing, but I attached a PDF. Feel free to [kindly, respectfully] let me know what you think.

It's definitely a longer think-piece, and heads up: I have a very snarky writing personality and am not afraid of four-letter words. While it's geared to yoga teachers, I think anyone who practices yoga would find it interesting.

I also really need title ideas.

Thanks!
Willow

Comments

Thanks so much Luis!

Naked in Motion

A bit click-bait-y, but you could title it "Yoga Teachings: Three Lies and a Truth". Change the "In Conclusion" heading to "A Truth". Move and rework the "I suppose a good question..." sentence to the start of the section. Rework the rest of the section to flow around that opening. Don't think it needs much, as what is there is already very effective.

Luis Cruz


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