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Dear patrons,

I'm still thinking about the comic title, and I already have a great version, but I'll rename the pages a little later. I will put the December awards in the same folders as the November awards. This will save you from unnecessary notifications to your email.

So far, I have put the comic in the folder for other rewards.

Thank you for your support!

Guru reward  https://www.patreon.com/posts/43409846

Pro reward https://www.patreon.com/posts/43409798

AMATEUR reward https://www.patreon.com/posts/43409508

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Comments

Yeah! Great optionπŸ‘ Thank you, Antonio!

Rino99

For the title, what about "Route 69"? :-))

Antonio Gallidabino

I'm glad you liked the story. It will become even more interesting further on

Rino99

I'll take that into account, thanks. One of my patrons helps me with dialogues.

Rino99

the dialogue is getting better, but still needs a bit more work. instead of saying β€œI don’t resist!” she should actually be saying β€œI’m not resisting!” to help make it more smooth

Phoenix_Pipe94

I've never been one to condone police brutality before but I must admit, im eager to delve in to whats coming(ha!) In the next few pages!!!

mat waren


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