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Tears of the Succubus-page21

 Dear patrons, page 21 is ready.  

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Tears of the Succubus-page21

Comments

Down Load, you know I haven't down loaded these set of pics yet, but you are tempting me hehehe ;-)

Fi~Fi

Oww! I am confused )) I do not quite understand what it means "d/l". Sorry for the misunderstanding )

Rino99

You still didn't answer lol

Fi~Fi

Thanks for your comment ) I can check the grammar, but it's hard for me to make the right speech context, sorry.

Rino99

page 21. the lines “honey you hurt me!” and “okay what do we have?” they don’t sound like it makes sense. like you have to make it more clearer by instead saying “you’re hurting me!” and “what do we have here?” thats why i suggest before posting, double check and see if the pictures right and the dialogue sounds just about right

Phoenix_Pipe94

Thank you, Fi-Fi!

Rino99

Did I make mistakes?

Rino99

Thanks!

Rino99

FUCK! Are you trying to tempt me into d/l, hahaha ;-) Fi~Fi XXX LOVE YOU

Fi~Fi

still gotta work on that dialogue though

Phoenix_Pipe94

So hot. Love deep anal. Keep it up.

Valuntus


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