Tears of the Succubus page 1-2 WIP
Added 2019-09-08 07:12:50 +0000 UTCDear patrons,
When I was working on Captive of the Orcs, I got lots of critics due to mistakes in the text.
I'd like to get your feedback about dialogues and about font size (if I should make it larger).
Thank you!
Comments
Thanks a lot
Rino99
2019-09-10 03:53:05 +0000 UTCThank you! You helped me a lot!
Rino99
2019-09-10 03:52:18 +0000 UTCFont color and bubbles are red only for VIP, the final variant will be white.
Rino99
2019-09-10 03:51:54 +0000 UTCThank you!
Rino99
2019-09-10 03:49:50 +0000 UTCI like it as well, thank you.
Rino99
2019-09-10 03:49:41 +0000 UTCThe font size is fine.
R_Gre
2019-09-09 13:54:11 +0000 UTCOn the second panel OK or Okay.
2019-09-09 10:41:15 +0000 UTC... an MMA fighter? Fighting is not for you. My DFC debut is next week. A DFC fight! Are you nuts!?
2019-09-09 10:36:55 +0000 UTCA few copy suggestions from a British English speaker.
2019-09-09 10:34:42 +0000 UTCThe text size is OK on my iPad, but I would find it hard to read on anything with a smaller screen. And the mid red text on grey bubbles will be harder for some people to read.
2019-09-09 10:32:57 +0000 UTCI like it a lot; no changes needed IMHO!
Gene Cahill
2019-09-08 17:01:33 +0000 UTCI don't know why, but I love this simple coloring for characters
leave2gether
2019-09-08 10:34:06 +0000 UTC
