NokiMo
RhaegarRRL
RhaegarRRL

patreon


Project - Chapter 17-20 - 1-20 pdf/epub

Author's note: Heya new post and notification m

Comments

Probably better to wait since its a 1x a week release, that way people are hooked before they start raging about the slow releases.

Chopper

I don't know how posting on patreon works but if its not difficult the author could post new chapters without notifications and keep tagging them project.

Chopper

This is ready for Royal Road. Great gritty & surprisingly realistic LitRPG

Camelopardalis

I'll second that - it's much easier to keep track if there are separate posts. This is quite good!

Mike G.

Except the coward is that new fire mage so...

Shaoraka

I don't think anyone would mind if you made a new post for new chapters. It's quite good so far...

Nate

It really depends on the system - in games like dark souls there's softcaps that make investment past a certain point a luxury. However, in other systems if you don't focus on just one or two stats you fall behind, hard.

Nate

MORE

Looks quite interesting, I think I'm hooked. Couldn't find anywhere on a map that fit the given descriptions so far though. Are you making the place up or are you using a 'real' place as a starting point?

Bad Timing

I like this group and how they are trying to figure things out. In AH so much about the system was never explained because Ilea is a 'Punch my problems in the face first and worry about the details never' kinda lady.

Chopper

The way she was introduced, in scenarios like that my mind always goes straight to infiltrator or coward.

Chopper

Moar moar moar.

M van Dongen

The problem with a bucket brigade vs a quick and stealthy smash and grab is that the bucket brigade leaves several people out in the open for the duration of the brigade exposing the group to a much higher risk of being discovered. With a quick in and out raid, they only really expose themselves to that risk while entering and exiting the building. The opportunity cost is that they are limited to what they can carry in one go, but since they all have packs that's actually a LOT of food, probably well over a hundred pounds of it.

Melting Sky

anyone else getting wierded out by the new gal? lots of odd details.

fbt

now they have an instructor lol

This story is awesome! I really love how you bring the struggle to life, it makes things that much more immersive. Also great character development so far, and nice use of classes and stats!

Pierre Steiner

It's Sunday, right?

Brent Heustess

I really hope you keep up with this one. I love every second of it so far,

Antiflower

Ok, this, I can definitely get behind. So much better than leaves a read the whole thing at once!

Acquiles Vitorino de Melo Graça

Yep, I'd even argue that this is, so far, much better than the beginning chapters of Azarinth because the author has much more experience under their belt and has had time to plan it out, so there's no pressure.

SoggyBiscuit

My opinion : this story is easily as good as Azarinth Healer. Starting this low on the spectrum will also preclude Goku syndrome for a good while.

M van Dongen

Thanks for the update and the new story is interesting!

Justin

I hope she doesn't fall into the dump stat trap. Dex 10 would allow her to potentially evade some hits ..especially from the big brutes ....as well as place her own hits better. Some int to better process info as well. Information is life in fights.

M van Dongen

That would be a prelude for a true calamity event. Ilea learning that this system has a food slot? Next thing we know, she is hunting down the her system to punch it till the food slot is included in the Elos system too.

BeepBoop

Thanks for the chapters. 10/10 from me. Love the mc cant wait for more

Kris

Really got into the story easily. Looking forward to more!

I think it says Netherlands at the start of the series.

Michael C

Loved it, thank you for another great read and hope your wound is doing well.

Straven

In which country is Kate now. England? Her Father seems to be in Scotland.

Constantin

Moar

M van Dongen

Good stuff

M van Dongen

Has a heavier feel than Azarinth. Still good and I look forward to how this story will go. I wonder if this is the Earth Ilea came from. I read a lot of stories so I don't remember if this is the one where Ilea being dragged across worlds, in a theory proposed earlier in the story (if I'm thinking of the right story), causing the system to reach her home. If it is the same Earth then I hope we get to see Rory from the first chapter of Azarinth. I don't know why but I've had this obsession in believing that Ilea would get to meet her college friend again.

Yotedom

Thank you. Enjoying the new story as well

Albedo's Ahoge

Really like the new story :)

Noah

I'm really enjoying this story!

Chopper

Use the tag to find post 13-16. Or download the pdf.which has 1-17

Michael C

Excellent. Glad she is getting some control. Stupid they did not fill the truck up with food. Should have done a bucket brigade until it was packed. Love the story

Michael C

Thank you!

Andrew

oof fun. I like game store basements also. Probably the coolest places I have ever been in.

Alexander Dupree

She need more point in int and wis.... Would be cool a berserker with a cold thinking head.

Null

tftc!

fbt


Related Creators