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Followup to the last post

This is kind of my idea for the first part of the comic. Brutal honesty, I probably wont do it without a director or storyboard suggester of some kind simply because I just dont have fun making these comics since its too much work. I dont know how to make panels or comics look good or have those panels inbetween panels or whatever. So I'd really just like someone to tell me what to do and ill do it. Im not sure how to add context, but the idea is like.. a succubus spirit or something enters this girl in the shower and she comes out to do horrible things with her brother? But I feel like im supposed to like.. make an intro or have the spirit monologue? Lol so yeah I have literally no idea what im doing. Help, please

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You could start off with a page that establishes the (wholesome?) relationship between the girl and her brother prior to her being possessed by the spirit. Then maybe the 2nd page introduces the succubus, sets up her motives for targeting this girl before she enacts her plan. Then the 3rd page could pick up from your storyboard above.

SissyboyAlex


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