everything is for the harem and each one develops as you have added things to the chapters already released, giving more to understand each character, it makes us look forward to the next chapter. I, for example, am looking forward to seeing what happens with Scarlet since before I only saw a photo as if giving understand that I was beginning to suspect that the protagonist is the same one from the past but now they see each other more so we understand what is going to await us and that she has been looking for him for a long time and because they are almost sure that he is the protagonist since he knows about things Not even the protagonist knows because he hasn't experienced them yet, but he will, so he's almost sure of it, but as he says in episode 6, now it's up to Scarle to find out how it's possible that what he said is the good guy, great job and I'm looking forward to episode 7. very eager
Alejandro Cervera Vazquez
2024-04-05 13:15:27 +0000 UTC
First of all, thank you for your great work and for finishing chapter 6. I'm looking forward to chapter 7. Well, let's start with the bad to end with the good. Then, as I told you a long time ago, changing Skaylar's story would mean the death of such a character and that's how it happened. Even if you told me that it was more emotional, but it didn't work out like that, I've only seen the protagonist suffer because of it and for Skaylar to be enjoying it doesn't add up to the fact that it's not for you or me since she is to blame and that I was thinking rather it gives the feeling that she was with someone else out there, if she were thinking and sad she would be locked in the house, besides the change of image makes one think that it was not the time, I am referring to the tattoos that for my taste no longer fit. The one that you had with her made her beauty stand out, but the most critical thing is that to get the other two scenes out we have to go back and redo many chapters, which would have been solved if you gave the option of breaking up with her the moment she arrives since she stops It's no longer worth it to say that I will redo the story from the beginning with zero affection for Skaylar unless you change your mind later and do as you did at the time and reorganize his story and if you leave it like this at least put something in Let us break up with her at that moment and not force us to go to dinner with her. If you are worried about the two mini events, you just have to have the protagonist go out for a walk and find the mini events in some way but let you know. More critics would be disappointed by changing Skaylar's story since if he was looking to go his route and take risks for it, the normal thing is that the events would continue the same as before, not like now, when it seems that you were in a relationship with Jess and not Skaylar, since that It is the excuse not to have sex with the protagonist and to tell him that first a date, for God's sake, he is not one of the virgin protagonists. There is nothing emotional about how we get to what is now, but rather anger at having followed his route. For this, of course, I will keep the file to be able to follow its route just to complete everything 100% since I like to have everything
Alejandro Cervera Vazquez
2024-04-05 13:14:59 +0000 UTC