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Added 2016-01-02 19:04:45 +0000 UTCALso, we have a big question to answer, should mugger be regular or futa?
Cast your votes over here: http://strawpoll.me/6430906
Now, onto the action, what should happen next? Leave your suggestions below! I've found out it's easier to plan things out if you answer the question: "How should the comic page start, and how should it end?", then joining both points together is easy.
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miyazaki style food all over the page.
Kenno Arkkan
2016-01-03 03:08:43 +0000 UTCI could definitely go with this. I still want to add that I think you should insert cute background cameo of Al and Fel as they too are enjoying a lovely Valentine's Date out in the open. Possibly slurping the same noodle of spaghetti ala "Lady and the Tramp". :3
MaveriKat
2016-01-03 02:29:26 +0000 UTCShould be at least 3 pages of food porn.
modjo
2016-01-03 00:55:37 +0000 UTCHow about next page starts with our couple here finishing dinner, muggs is very impressed by the beauty of the place and how delicious th emeal was, and how thankful she is that deniz took em on such a nice dinner date. Mugger playfully rubbing her foot on deniz's leg trying to imply something. THe comic page would end with them rushing to a bathroom stall for some sneaky action :O
Kenno Arkkan
2016-01-02 19:26:41 +0000 UTCWell, I think the end point would probably be sexual after-glow in a hotel room. As for happening next, getting a Table and seeing a number of Kenno-Congoers had similar ideas... so you have an array of various costumes, outfits, and just smelly people at tables on the main floor of the restaurant before going to the next raised set which has people taking things more seriously. And insert cute background cameo of Al and Fel as they too are enjoying a lovely Valentine's Date out in the open. Possibly slurping the same noodle of spaghetti ala "Lady and the Tramp". :3
MaveriKat
2016-01-02 19:14:34 +0000 UTC
