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Muhammad Shafiq Mohd Nizam
Muhammad Shafiq Mohd Nizam

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Chapter 370: SNL (1)

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Thank you for the great chapter 🙏 Also, wasn't Andy Samberg already in this world as Detective Jake in the Brooklyn Nine-Nine police department?

KingSpy25i .

Thought the inventor side of Ed was pretty cool. Would like to see people’s reactions to some of the more advanced stuff he’s made. President Batman is hilarious as always. Would be interesting to see how Ed is seen by others locally & internationally as a political figure when he visits Cuba with the Prez, and not solely as a celebrity. The gacha is fine in my opinion, it makes sense that he’d get better and stronger items, powers, etc. over time. It stays true to story’s progression and I’m sure most ppl would feel a bit miffed if he was still getting ‘mundane’ and normal things after having the gacha for years in universe.

ieatstars

La verdad la historia esta muy bien echa y bien planeada. Se puede decir que la musical que añades en los momentos oportunos y con una letra que va muy acuerdo a la situacion y los momentos pasados. Solo me pregunto despues de todos esos poderes, robot, el poder viajar a deferentes mundos o como mencionaste antes ir a masmorras cual es el plan con este protagonista. El tendra un personaje femenino final o seguira cambiando de pareja cada tanto. O se volvera un playboy como lo fue en su gira. Me gusta mucho esta historia, tomate tu tiempo pero nunca la abandones sin terminarla

Kasme 12

Seems like patreon decided my comment was too long.... so continuing from where it cuts off: "though, both of those options sound interesting. Maybe mixing in some Star Trek or Star Wars could work out, especially considering he is already exploring warp drives (if i remember it correctly)

Ivan

Love the story, but since the timeskip it feels a bit weird ? You previously limited the power level of the gacha, but some of the stuff he got during the timeskip were a bit too powerful for that world. He now seems to have everything, power that could topple countries, money that could buy them, not sure what could pose a challenge to him and i'm not sure where you could go with the story, except maybe into space or other dimensions. (

Ivan


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