Chapter 169: Gala (2) REWRITE!
Added 2023-11-06 14:16:13 +0000 UTCComments
I just listened to the song and wow.... Great song . added to my playlist
Skarpi
2023-11-08 15:07:59 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter, thank you for being able to close out the Taylor relationship nicely. It's only right for somebody that's just starting off their career as a celebrity to focus on their path more than their relationships right now. Even if Taylor had known that the contract was terminated and she was so free artist. She still wouldn't have been able to freely go out with Ed because of the minor status that he has currently. I like the fact that you're pushing Selena and Ed to get together but it shouldn't be too fast. They could start with a fling because they both already been feeling it but I'm not sure that should also be too fast unless you want to give off rebound vibes and if you don't, then you'd have to wait a couple chapters before he actually emotionally comes to terms with the fact that he "got dumped". I know Haley and Edward have already had their little moment of intimacy so they could try to ignite that, but I feel like that route is also very obvious and will not work out, knowing how Haley is in future seasons. She is very gullible, and I think she needs to be able to go through her maturing phase 1st before she earns a relationship with Ed. Nothing but the best for my boy. Also because he's branching out into rap and he's also going into therapy I have a song suggestion where I feel like this would be right up his alley especially with all the things he's been through NF: Therapy Session this encompasses a lot of what a celebrity would feel when they get to their fame and people start to judge them and him being a kid and actually going through therapy would be a perfect and believable song to have made during the time of his emotional bought, also sorry for being late you said you needed an extra day, so I came on Tuesday instead I really need to turn on my notifications for Patreon😭
Dead3nd
2023-11-07 20:55:59 +0000 UTCWill there be a chapter today
Cesar Montemayor
2023-11-07 14:59:09 +0000 UTCHonestly, I don’t know how to feel about this chapter. Okay, 1st about Taylor pushing Selena. Never happening, she’ll probably keep away from Ed (and would not push her bf towards him unless Taylor wants to keep away from Selena). 2nd Selena is completely a different person. Although she might be a fan (little crush) on Ed, Selena’s main focus should be on Taylor. (Just picture it, one of your friends is completely acting crazy and anxious and they tell you “Here’s my money, go!”. Does a real friend just say, thanks “I’m out”. I sure hope not. They should talk out the situation and find a solution.) 3rd I think you’re awkwardly forcing Selena and Ed. I understand the little flirting here and there. (Friends might tease a bit but there’s a line we don’t cross) (Just picture if your reader didn’t know who Selena is, what kinda of impression would you get from this person) Not the best chapter in my opinion.
VanBlight
2023-11-06 21:04:36 +0000 UTCWill there be another chapter today?
Drone Footage
2023-11-06 20:39:03 +0000 UTCHe did the Andre special (The League) at the end there. Very powerful.
Sondre - Asumodeus
2023-11-06 17:43:29 +0000 UTCis her not "trusting" Ed going to create a Divide?
Skarpi
2023-11-06 15:28:23 +0000 UTCI don't think it will happen
Matias Arce
2023-11-06 15:09:11 +0000 UTCGreat Chapter. I hope Taylor and Ed start their relationship now. I like a love story with a happy ending.
kay4t123
2023-11-06 15:00:54 +0000 UTCI can foresee a threesome with Taylor and Selena coming soon 🫨
Soh•M©
2023-11-06 14:57:04 +0000 UTCWhen is part 3 going to come out lol I can’t wait anymore lmao
Cesar Montemayor
2023-11-06 14:49:14 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter, it was wonderful conclusion to Taylor’s dilemma, still can’t wait till Joseph suffers from Edwards wrath muahahaha😈😅 side note: I’m still on the Haley and Edward Ship, so even though I applaud Taylor for being a free artist, it won’t change my mind hehehe 😊
Cedrick Jacobe
2023-11-06 14:46:22 +0000 UTCI keep hearing "Scars to Your Beautiful" when he was talking to the dieting model Thank You and Get well soon
Skarpi
2023-11-06 14:34:01 +0000 UTCDam I thought I was 1st
VanBlight
2023-11-06 14:17:24 +0000 UTC😊
Cedrick Jacobe
2023-11-06 14:16:33 +0000 UTCFirst
Cedrick Jacobe
2023-11-06 14:16:27 +0000 UTC
