Chapter 168: Gala (1)
Added 2023-11-05 13:51:48 +0000 UTCComments
In summary haley
Matias Arce
2023-11-06 13:59:10 +0000 UTCI feel you man I got sick as well the soar throat is the worst part have a speedy recovery.
Sleepy reader
2023-11-05 19:31:57 +0000 UTCI feel like I might know what will happen when Ed’s gonna show her the contract but who knows.
Julien
2023-11-05 18:53:23 +0000 UTCThe chapter was pretty good, take all the time you need to recover your health. That is most important. We can always wait. Now the time for my constructive criticism. The organization of the entire chapter is pretty solid, given the runaway, and then the interviews of the clothing, but when speaking about outfits that will be emphasized(important) say Edwards or Haley's designs, or somebody reputable like Versace it wouldn't be too much to include a little snippet of a picture to show us what you're meaning when you're describing it. That way you can extend your word count along with also giving us a visual representation of what you mean. It also makes it more believable if you just use the actual outfits that they used in the gala that time of the year to make it less work on yourself for just imagining new outfits so that way you can only focus on the main characters designs. For the drama, I feel like it might've been a little bit rushed because the conclusion seemed too easy? Unless there's gonna be a hidden clause because I feel like they didn't really care for Taylor's career so why would they care about her being in a safe place when they were taking advantage of her in her own place? It seems counterintuitive, but I'm glad that we finally put that mess behind us and Taylor can chill out and be put on the back burner. Also, please don't make Taylor parasitically attached to Ed we see enough of her and that relationship is still kind of wrong. Seeing as it's a minor and a adult if you really want them together, you can skip until he's of age but I feel like that shouldn't be pressed on too much because they will get found out. He's a kid and should be experimenting with different women especially now that he's famous. It seems kind of dumb to stick him with one celebrity even when we know that that hardly ever works out in the end both in real life and it shouldn't in this one either. They both need to expand their reach and have different experiences with different people to have new experiences. You have to keep in mind that the reason for Taylor Swift's biggest hits is because of some of her breakup stories so in order for her to have those stories, and to have that type of background she actually has to go through it so I think she should go NPC mode for a bit and start dating whoever she did along those years until Ed actually comes of age.Sorry from my tirade, thank you for the chapter it was amazing and take all the time you need to recover.
Dead3nd
2023-11-05 17:44:18 +0000 UTCWell that was a fun read and thanks for the chapter. Take as much rest that you need and take your medicine on time, take care of yourself.
Marcolicious138
2023-11-05 17:27:18 +0000 UTCHell yeah take as much time as you want you are sick you need to recover simple as that
Monstermash
2023-11-05 15:09:55 +0000 UTCNo problem
stich420
2023-11-05 14:43:55 +0000 UTCLol idk but hahaha we’re both really excited aren’t we hahaha😆
Cedrick Jacobe
2023-11-05 13:58:01 +0000 UTCNo problem here author-san , make sure you take care of yourself, rest comes before anything else😊😊
Cedrick Jacobe
2023-11-05 13:56:50 +0000 UTCWho won lmao
Cesar Montemayor
2023-11-05 13:53:01 +0000 UTCThx for the ch been waiting for this😅
Cedrick Jacobe
2023-11-05 13:52:47 +0000 UTCFirst
Cesar Montemayor
2023-11-05 13:52:12 +0000 UTCFirst yayyyy😊😊😊😊
Cedrick Jacobe
2023-11-05 13:52:10 +0000 UTC
