Chapter 88: Tribute (Part 1)
Added 2023-05-02 07:02:10 +0000 UTCComments
I would have thought the Kakashi thing would have been countered by his perfection ability from Mr. Omnipotent, or at the very least changed somewhat due to his skills making him always fashionably late where everyone seems to think it's cool for some reason.
Ototsu_Yume
2023-05-02 16:55:18 +0000 UTCThere's this thing you do with the pov; I don't know if it's intentional; an example would be at the start where the mc uses Batman's skill to go unrecognized; Andre says, "Wait. Who is that? Why does he know my name?", then the mc goes, "I didn't hear his suspicions as I was already turning on a corner to get to Dunphy's street.". I noticed this, and the weird part is the logic. The first part of the sentence should not be there if he didn't hear Andre. I would change it to "he didn't hear his suspicions as Edward was turning a corner to get to dunphys street" Good chap tho
Kheiven Dhaiti
2023-05-02 08:25:42 +0000 UTCthank you! also I hope you're feeling better!
thedistraction
2023-05-02 08:04:14 +0000 UTCstill be careful tho
Skarpi
2023-05-02 07:48:01 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. Hope you are feeling better
LX
2023-05-02 07:33:36 +0000 UTCit's fine now. I was dizzy for a whole day before lol
Muhammad Shafiq Mohd Nizam
2023-05-02 07:33:20 +0000 UTCanother one coming in a few min. the last one will be in a few hours tho
Muhammad Shafiq Mohd Nizam
2023-05-02 07:32:48 +0000 UTCthanks for the chap! so those 3 chaps are they going to be all at once today or spread out?
thedistraction
2023-05-02 07:31:16 +0000 UTCNext chapter tomorrow or tonight?
Amar Haikal
2023-05-02 07:20:13 +0000 UTCty and how's your injury ?
Skarpi
2023-05-02 07:20:03 +0000 UTC
