Vestan Reach - Chapter 5
Added 2025-07-30 20:00:04 +0000 UTCVestan Reach continues...
Comments
ok, now you are getting me interested. Next chapter please.
J.R. Turner
2025-08-01 07:34:29 +0000 UTCIntense descriptive dramatic. Company implies economic factions over government but treaty reference compounds complexity of the scene. Loved the descriptive layout and origin design. Intrigued at the security technical descriptions and yet compartmentalized roles of characters. The implications of a secret police or internal affairs running damage control on information before it gets presented for evaluation as a truth for interpretation is an interesting twist to running it by legal before leadership decides value and actions. A fun read, I'll have to go looking for the rest of this story to enjoy. Thanks.
T Griffetts
2025-07-31 15:08:53 +0000 UTC
