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[REVIEW] The Black Ship - Chapter 49 Part 1

Enjoy this weeks review by @Soundwave119. It's a good reminder and recap until the next part of the Black Ship is ready.

[REVIEW] The Black Ship - Chapter 49 Part 1

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The maniacal laugh was bit a reference to Red vs Blue Season 5 scene with Evil guy OMally talking to someone on interstellar communications. He does some loud maniacal laugh, then realizes it was bit too loud, since all of his allies near him dont know of the overall grand plan of his unlike the person he is talking with. OMally does some quieter maniacal laugh to not draw too much attention to the people he is duping.

Soundwave119

As always very good review, especially the maniacal laugh! I use a maniacal laugh in my English classes. However, do you really think the Duke wants Clara to be “The Prince”? He tried to have her killed in Chapter 1.

Tim Edwards

I enjoy The Black Ship and reading the comments, but I am not a fan of comparing the graphics used to external sources since the author writes the story and Scifistories puts the writing together. You may confirm the author agrees with the similarities, but did the story describe the armor, or the star system, or the distances and routes each of the houses would travel to attend the duke at morningstar? Your reviews are fun to hear but I find them distracting from the story when you abridge the terms House War, That Woman, Lord Regent. I get the details incorrect easily already, but abbreviating is hard for a new reader to follow if they are unfamiliar with these terms. I will keep reading your reviews though some of your content strays from the story I believe you do care about The Black Ship and what the story delivers to the science fiction genre. I enjoy the graphics contribution of SciFistories in that they build on the story with suggestion how it might visually stand without taking from the story content. I honestly believe you do a good review of the story chapter and scifistories adds incredible content in visuals, but my loyalty lies with the author's vision and how the story unfolds allowing the fans to speculate on the next direction or actions. My appreciation to everyone that shares their input to make this even more enjoyable. Thanks EkhidnaWritz for a great story, Thanks SciFistories for great visuals to enjoy with this story, Thanks SoundWave119 for your review how these stories touch use all. Thanks to all the fans for commenting on your favorite parts and hopes for the story to come.

T Griffetts


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