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[REVIEW] The Black Ship - Chapter 48 Part 4

He's another great review/overview by YouTuber @Soundwave119.

It's a good recap before we get the next part of the Black Ship.

[REVIEW] The Black Ship - Chapter 48 Part 4

Comments

I hear ya but sometimes things happen. Especially when someone is creating a storyline from their mind.

ohnodevo

Where is the new episode? I thought Patreon was getting new episodes on monday and youtube on Tuesday's. Also most of the episodes have shortened in time, the average is 22 minutes or so when they used to be 35 or so. Love the story, but remember now days people have a short attention spans and it is easier to move on to other things. I love it and i am not going anywhere but from a customer prospective you guys should make it more standard , for example mondays to patron tuesdays to youtube, and side stories should only be flashbacks not part of the main stories. Like the first one was when whyet was young it was perfect. But the second one was on the current timeline when he went down to the planet for a celebration, that should be in the main stories, not as a side stories. Anyways, thanks for a great storie.

Michael Nunez

one thing to mention there was not 6 WS in the astorian forces. There was 6 just in the third fleet.

U.Kaya

I understand the need for this chapter but was not my favorite, good and needed jst not my favorite. I enjoyed the review more, great job!!

Jason B

One of the things some of us "extreme" fans like is that @EkhindnaWritz does is make the story interconnected between chapters. Some of those are left open-ended, not a real cliffhanger, but not resolved immediately in the chapter. This leaves places for fans to postulate what will be in the future, and gives the story a more organic growth so there are surprises in the telling. But like the discord discussions, this review is a nice additional conversation for where it has been and where it might go. Here is to another chapter coming soon I hope, so many little details to see where they go.

J.R. Turner

As much as I agree with you, I would hate to see Mr. W killed. Although I would hate to see this as well, I was thinking Jade would replace one of Wyatt’s brothers most likely Weskle. And it would be Wyatt noticing something strange like Jade not fainting when his father and Wam do.

Tim Edwards

As always a good recap. @Soundwave119 However, what do you think about their opposing view about the totem. Cornelius looked at it from a top down perspective, whereas the Prince looked at it from a bottom up.

Tim Edwards

Future twist One of Wyatt’s brothers will kill Jade after Jade try’s to replace Mr. W. Hunter instincts will know something is wrong or off. Mr. W. Is the perfect mark for Jade because he has almost no family and friends. Won’t be seriously missed when he’s gone.

Charles Davenport

I don't have the author's lead on specifics, but I like how he layed out this story enough to stand on its own. I am glad people find memories of other things they enjoyed while reading this, and are inspired to debate on the story. If it just copied other stuff, I don't think it would have the same following. A chief prepares a meal that offers many flavors, enjoy the meal for what it is, appreciating the effort that provides all the flavors. My thanks to Ekhidna for the menu selections and the appetizers. I thoroughly enjoy the plating and atmosphere. All in all a good review even if I felt it drifted off chapter a few times. Thanks Scifistories and SoudWave119

T Griffetts

Previously I had thought that episodes finished where they did in large part due to the Authors time constraints... But this episode dispells that as the author deliberately creates 2 cliff hangers thus making clear that he wants to keep us guessing... Or at least craving more

Darrenj

My best guess is that Federiko is a son of Deborah Cintor and therefore brother to Felicity. I would not be surprised if we see a power struggle between Federiko and Felicity in the future. Felicity is the current heir of house Cintor, but in the principality that is obviously not something that's set in stone.

TranquilityStorm

I believe it is incorrect to state the head of house Cintor is personally in Anderson space conducting negotiations. Veronica indicates one Federiko Cintor is trying to convince house Anderson to join the traitors. Later on Cornelius finally let us know the name of Felicity's mother and head of house Cintor, Deborah.

TranquilityStorm

I've come to expect the unexpected from Ekidna

newstart627

I love soundwave reviews! 😘😊

Anthony Romanov


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