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The Black Ship - Chapter 48 Part 4 | Shadows Cast in Jade Light

We are back! Appologies for the delay, everyone. The Easter weekend meant family plans affected Ekhinda's free time.

Welcome to the next installment of The Black Ship!!
Runtime: 31 minutes.

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The Black Ship - Chapter 48 Part 4 | Shadows Cast in Jade Light

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one thing I've come to expect... expect the unexpected :)

newstart627

I've been reading and re reading this series and have a few observations 1. What's thought processes during conflict almost have a cognitive ability ( ure diviners ) 2. count draemores daughter is eound up way way too tight which will favor Cynthia in the future ? 3 the letter Clara gave to captain Ortega is a written copy of the surrender speech given by felicity cantor 4. as for Clara not asking for any sort of reparations will definitely make draemore as well as Andrew cayston sit up and take notice 5. Andrew capstone will challenge wyatt to a duel but will lose but not be killed. which will really screw with Andrew's mind. just some pre weekend thoughts. Really have a great weekend

newstart627

Is that ability only allowing him to mimic people electronically though, so he steals their identity but exposes of the real person then makes them 'disappear' again off world before taking up another electronic identity.?

Jayne

One looks from the top down, the other looks from the bottom up.

Tim Edwards

Hopefully, when Wyatt becomes aware of the danger to his family he can send his knight, Desmond Oakmoon, to protect and relocate them. That would certainly repay Oakmoon's debt and fulfill his oath of loyalty to Wyatt.

Michael Holland

Another well written story. I was a bit confused at the start but soon caught up to what was happening. Royals intrigue knows no bounds. This story could last for a very long time or until the author grew tired of planning and working out new plots and twists.

Mike Holman

I think EkindaWritez has a plan to have Mr Worlo to somehow give his life while protecting Wyatt’s family in the future. Maybe one of the family dies but the others are saved. I hope I’m wrong but I’ll wait to see if I’m right.

Darwin Johnson

Ooh, that would fit into my theory he's a missing Astor - he may have got the Uur Diviners tech the same time as Clara.

Jayne

We're due a dark chapter methinks.

Jayne

I'm thinking he might be one of the missing Astor brothers....that they choose their Alliegances is demonstrated by Clara choosing the Prince.....despite being the Duke's favourite, nay 'adored' niece.

Jayne

Would love to see the Dukes face when he hears the message lol

roger housh

Wondering if Jade is one of the missing Astor brothers, perhaps Caldro who clearly irritated Clara - as suggested when she said Meghan would never allow her to forget she missed Caldro as she was sharing her family photo's with Wyatt. Hoping Wyatt's family remain safe, dread to think what Wyatt would do...😨

Jayne

And there it is Ekhidna's trade mark cliffhanger ending. he so does like to tease us like that!.

Drew - UK

The Duke and the Prince both contemplate the structure of a kingdom. Duke Draymore emphasized how the use of violence enforces the order and power, where as the prince pondered the value of the pieces involved, favoring the knight for it's unique moves while seeing the pawn ability to evolve into almost any other piece. Jade turns out to be a mole/spy playing at loyalty to several prominent figures, while apparently serving directly under Veronica Draymore. I know not how he fools the friends and loved ones of the person he pretends to be, likely some form of tech or gene manipulation to alter his image. But I find it most interesting that he is pretending to be a commoner to perform his work. Then again, as a commoner he would be less scrutinized by nobles that were always suspecting each other of ulterior motives. What ever the case, Jade has a hint about Wyatts' origins only to suspect he is more than everything he has been able to discover so far. Jade didn't include anything about Wyatt in his reports to any he spoke with this time. Being at Machha he likely had heard of the Haego battle, maybe even rumor of the leaked video. Jades reference to discord likely refer to the prince's elevations and awards stemming from the Haego conflict that stirred the nobles when announced. My thoughts are that Duke Draymore wants to ensure he is the power that controls the violence involved in ruling, where the prince concerns himself with aspects of power and foundations for ruling by realizing where each power originates and is used. The chess game reveals the prince weakness in tactic is in diversions and hidden strategy. The duke may be weak in ensuring the body supports the head in leadership. His roman like perspective, 'give them bread and games' suggest he does not value the body (commoners) but only remaining the head (noble/regent). Veronica seems to be on par with Clara but for her ideology serving her father. She is a dangerous woman to be sure and is using Jade to ensure others loyalties align supporting her fathers rule. Jade is ruthless and cunning, so I believe Wyatt's family could be in danger, if he feels Wyatt could be extorted to protect them. Reports are arriving for both the duke and the prince, and each will have significant impact where we go from here. Will the Yichanti reply be favorable, and what will it provide for the prince? Is the duke about to hear Haego was retaken for House Ferrentis and his forces were also defeated there by Clara? Is House Ferrentis going to remain neutral or side with the prince? Ekhidna has provided another great chapter in The Black Ship, thank you.

T Griffetts

Ohh the webs we weave

Robert Whitehead

If the Count messes with Wyatts family even hell will not keep the Count safe from Wyatt.

Jeff Wright

Jade's familiarity with Veronica suggests an equality of status. Could he be Maurice? Or a royal of another house?

Deucesden

Third watching, I realized I did not comment on the "apology" for being late. When it comes to #Ekhidnawritez time with family. I can wait a day if it means he has time to make him feel all is well with family. Since that means he will write with full mind ability and will not mind when he does write. So thanks for the chapter and keep this quality, we will continue wanting more.

J.R. Turner

Excellent setup Ekhidna your by far one of the best story tellers I’ve ever had the chance to follow thank you for what you do

Jeremy Cable

Wyatt needs to relocate his family to his Barney, it’s only a matter of time until they come for them.

greg garavet

That worries me

Jean-marc Ladouceur

Even more worried about Wyeths family now. That spy is 2 faced ... Nope 3 or more so he can look like anybody.

Jean-marc Ladouceur

I hope Wyatt’s family is safe! They bout to be running for there lives

Michael O'Brien

That is what I'm talking about. What an absolutely fantastic world-building chapter. Chapters like this prevent rider's block. Because it opens up so many different avenues of storytelling and so many different directions all of them fantastic. I cannot wait to see what they do next.

Dallas Cruze

Daguq???? Veronica is more devious than i thought lol BUT i CALLED IT Clara is the Duke's favorite one of the best chapter so far IMO

BenRedDevil

It's about to get ugly

Duane Jones

I'd like to see Maximillian and Captain Siro take the responsibility to protecting the Staples. They both owe Wyatt. They could both pledge themselves to House Staples. Maybe Maximillian could keep himself busy on Volantis and build a vineyard near the Staples. Create a "Wolfhound" wine label.

cjoflv

@ 5:19 (Jade) "Connecting to his first TARGET the call was sent". (first call to Tamrin Cayston) Tamrin, Andrew Cayston and Veronica Draymore are Jade's "targets"? Odd choice of words, TARGET Is Jade a double agent? Did his changling tech come from the same source as Clara's mind reading tech?

cjoflv

I liked the way that Ekhidna show us in a silent way that the Duke and the Prince thinks the same way, but distorted and the truth it's in the middle... That's the way I see it

Jaime Nunes

Jade’s obsession with Wyatt is giving me anxiety about Wyatt’s family. He knows his father’s name now, and his home world. I seriously hope the prince has enough foresight to send someone to silently watch over them. Or someone in Wyatt’s family is going to be killed. I truly hope that’s not something planned for the future of the story.

Darwin Johnson

I think Jade is going to do something he will regret

Frank Carrion

I am both excited to see what will happen next and terrified to see what Jade is going to do, especially with the added detail on how he gets around without being noticed. 😲😰

Amerhen

This story gets better and better. The anologies spark conversations in my head.hours and hours of thought and reflection.

Jesse Roberson

I been looking forward to this episode. To see what the duke and his allies are doing helps to balance all that's happening. Jade definitely seems to be a noble. He starting to find the peacies that is wyett's history. So many folks he seems to bow to, hard to gauge witch one is his true master. The duke's daughter seem to be on top of that list. Kinda like hearing the philosophy of the duke. He seems to understand much of the universe of man. Can't wait to see his reaction to the return of Clara's captives if receiving the massage at the end is any indication. Thanks to jade's perception on lukax my fear of the man has been reduced. I honestly thought they were one and the same till now. It amazes me the different philosophy in this episode and how they sound similar. It's really cool to me. Nice to see lukax isn't giving the prince wins in chess. Good to have someone better then you on your team.

Gady Tuff

I can’t wait for that traitor Duke Cornelius reaction to the call from Count Jhinaq, finding out what happened and how his forces were utterly defeated and humiliated . And that they will be delivered back to them in total shame.

Darwin Johnson

Wyatt Staples is the pawn that everyone forgets, and is at some point the unexpected move that changes the game. His history even at the Academy is not a bit of note, just enough skill to be a pilot, not enough to be marked for anything exceptional. His past is not noted due to him being a simple commoner and typical of the kind to enlist, never filling out information that was not 100% required, so no family info is included. Now, when they are looking at all the ties, one normally finds are not there. So a common pawn is now a baron, a pilot of unexpected talent and still an unknown except to his closest friends(Clara and Cynthia). We all should be so lucky.

J.R. Turner

Glad we got some time with Jade. Has ability to mimic/replace people. Will Jade continue to try to infiltrate the prince's inner circle or will eventually focus all his efforts tracking down Wyatt's family in Volantis?

cjoflv

Aaaaa two cliffhangers in one episode aaaaaa

dotnet

Great episode. It seems Jade and Andrew are believing Wyatt is more than what he is. However, now they have a place and his father’s name.

Tim Edwards

Interesting 🧐

Andi

second

Jason B

My personal theory after this episode is Jade is some kind of alien race of Changelings with the ability to morph their face into anyone they kill. The biggest clue was the comment they said about not remembering what their own face looked like anymore.

RustyButterKnife

Good morning/afternoon/evening everyone! Great way to start the day.

ohnodevo

Jade is closing in on Wyatt. What is he? WOW didn't see any of that coming. Thanks ❤️

SDS

I'm so glad I woke up my day is already good

Che

I second that

Åge Steiro

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