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[REVIEW] The Black Ship - Chapter 48 Part 1

He's another great review/overview by YouTuber @Soundwave119.

Soundwave119 has a knack for highlighting details you might have missed, while also linking past events in previous chapters and offering different perspectives on the story.

I hope this adds to your own thoughts and helps others (like me) fully grasp everything that’s going on!

[REVIEW] The Black Ship - Chapter 48 Part 1

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what's the message Clara asked Sir Siro deliver... tell us !, enquiring minds need to know. lol

newstart627

Nice review over all. How Wyatt has stepped up in leadership and command over his squadron could have been more of the results of the training from Redford, and his adjusting to being a noble now. Wyatt appears to have a closer relationship to the squad members, hinting that something more happened than a drinking session on the planet that left him with a hangover and capture of Javier Wunder. Each composter adoption of training recognizes Wyatt leadership and skills, but also appreciation of each other. This leads Gregor to initiate the proposal about Leopold, begrudgingly he admonishes the need to do something to protect the progress they have as an elite squadron, but leaves the solution for Wyatt to figure out. Clara caring for the overworking Jincho could have been mentioned an example of what Redford told Wyatt about being responsible for if he knighted Leopold under House Staples. I completely agree with the debarking of prisoners as reviewed, but not enough was spoken to agree with what Clara plans for the remaining ship. I was more inclined to think it was being provided to Istanel of House Ferentis to aid in Haetrung protection and treaty enforcement. Thanks for a fun review SoundWav.

T Griffetts

Well done

Chip1217

I still think that the Composter's current Royals want to keep their squad together and want to teach Wyatt Staples that he can give the only commoner a knighting. That way their leader will be seen as a Noble leader with good sense. Looks better for the whole squad.

J.R. Turner

Very good review. Pointing out the importance items.

Fred Flint

OK, thanks for the info.

Jeff Wright

you need to wait for the side story I'm working on (Ekhinda just gave it to me). It's the story of how Wunder gets captured...

Dennis McCarthy

Good job, but I think you missed the capture of Wunder.

Jeff Wright


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