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The Black Ship - Chapter 47 Part 3 | Wyatt and the Staple Followers

Due to me going away for a few days, Ekhinda has kindly got slightly ahead of himself with the story and today as Patreon supporters, you have early access to the next installment.
I hope you enjoy this latest part!

YouTube will get the same episode on Tuesday at the usual time.

The Black Ship - Chapter 47 Part 3 | Wyatt and the Staple Followers

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I too am surprised at Istonel figuring it out but at the same time it makes sense. Same goes for why he stopped Wyatt from sharing his story. Istonell uses his experience to understand species as a xenobiologist so figuring out his suit was messed with in a "harmless" way and the hatred Wyatt has for the Drazzan is simpler to narrow down. As far as stopping Wyatts story, knowing how he feels after seeing the horror the Drazzan are capable of he probably deduced that Wyatts experience was probably worse and/or more personal so he wanted to spare Wyatt from reliving it as he didn't want to relive his experience

Eric Burch

I agree..........a mix of "WTF, you've got to be kidding me", "STRANGER DANGER" and "NOPE, NOT TODAY". Wyatts acceleration into nobility is about as hard as the menuver that earned him the Woodshafts Ace title lol

Eric Burch

Actually I think you'd lose that bet. Clara has this inate ability to analyze the situation and come up with solutions. This is why she feels so close to Wyatt....... because they are so similar. Wyatt, naturally brilliant tactician who can analyze the battle field and come up with solutions. When an idea hits him you hear his thoughts and his eyes move back and forth while processing the info. Clara is the same only her battlefield is political.........remember how her hands fidget and Wyatt noticed before it seems like she was talking to herself? Her experience that gave her the REAPER name as well as her view on how nobles should be and Wyatt being a commoner on the recieving end of unworthy nobles make them of like mind so it's not as difficult for her to calculate what Wyatts view might be

Eric Burch

awesome as always

Ryan

Yeah, injected with a little Roundup.

ohnodevo

Some would say Wyatt was destiny to be a noble. The right brain, and cunning. 😗

Jeff Wright

And so Wyatt starts learning all about politics, this is going to be Rich

Chip1217

I’m glad you’re getting away for a few days I hope you rest well.

Chip1217

Thanks for this early installment. It came Just in time to serve as salve for the wound and much needed healing relief!!

Colin Sland

Yes they are! Welcome to patreon!

Dennis McCarthy

@scifistories1977 - Finally made it on here. I hope your days away are a vacation of some sort.

ohnodevo

Back to the grass roots of the Principality!!

John Myers

I think that same thought after every chapter. It's agonizing to wait a week between each offering. If your able to succeed in that, you're a better man than me.

Mike Bullers

Audio only

Jean-marc Ladouceur

Is that the audio version (not video)?

Dennis McCarthy

I managed to hear last ones early by clicking hyper link. This one did not have one

Jean-marc Ladouceur

I love the way Ekhidna handel the interaction between Wyatt and Istonel. That was a classic Noble Enlightenment as to the true nature of the Drazzen. It could have gone either way how Istonel handled it. I was surprised he took ai as a valued lesson in lieu of striking back as if insulted. There’s hope for Instonel yet in my eyes. Cudos Ekhidna for the handling of this character development. A true friendship has been born of common experience. I love the way this story is developing!!

John Myers

I wonder if Lachoa can be food for Drazzan?

Rapture Sinking

The lessons and growth of Wyatt Staples, champion of Princess Clara and in the Future of House Astor. As time goes by our hero’s humility will see his esteem grow, and his loyalty to House Astor will see him elevated to a rank second only to the ruling house , this will come because Wyatt with a “W” does not want the wealth and fame and power, but because Wyatt with a “W” because he was once a commoner will always be a commoner at heart and to that end will NOT abuse his position but use it to make the lives all better. The Story continues 😎😎

Andi

Once again Wyatt abilities are used to rectify the situation. He is now learning how to use diplomacy.

Fred Flint

More thoughts. Clara, Redmond and the Prince all seem to want a return to the original values of the Principality as laid out by the original Julian Astor. Those values were that the Nobles would make decisions that would be the best for ALL the people. Over time these values have shifted as generations of selfish, greedy and self serving nobles have interpreted them to suit themselves, shoving the Commoners out of the way in the Process and devaluing them (filthy commoners etc) into almost another species. This allows the Nobles to cr*p all over the Commoners without guilt and without damaging their own self esteem (bad Nobles bring out the Mr Worlo in me 😆😆), but I digress. Wyatt is the absolute embodiment of Julian Astors - and Clara's and her small set's value system. Wyatt is strong, brave, capable, but also humble, unassuming and protective of the innocents. I think Clara is deliberately taking full advantage of Wyatt's virtues by building him up to become a Role Model to the Nobility of what they are supposed to be like and to contrast his selfless nature, his concern for life and fairness with their warped, entirely self centred beliefs.

Jayne

So short! I might need to wait until full chapters are released before binging them from now on.

Alex Aims

Pure speculation. Is there any legitimate heir to House Oakmoon? Is Declan’s mother a commoner (my guess she is) ? Was the duel about House Oakmoon being a House of bastard children? I could see Wyatt and Declan becoming friends especially if he sees similarities between Declan and his brothers. Really want to know the Composters reaction to Declan.

Scot

Wyatt assigned as mediator for Haego by Clara. Now Declan Oakmoon and his servants have pledged loyalty to him. it makes me wonder why Rachel needs to talk Wyatt in private. Leopold, Noltar and Gregor had private moments with Wyatt. Rachel is the only Composter who has yet to speak to Wyatt alone. I assume it something simple like apologizing to him. This is something she wanted to do early on. But the Composters indicated that wasn’t necessary with Wyatt. Or could it be something else?

cjoflv

Clara seems to be forcing Wyatt into the upper levels of noble responsibility at breakneck speed. It may not even be six months since his ennoblement but now he's a knight, a wing commander, a royal mediator, a bronze ace, a (very effective) Marine-equivalent who is combat proven, a royal confidant so trusted he has a dormant commission, and has earned the genuine respect of even former enemies, including a now former lone wolf. Then Declan comes along...

carsparks1980

May you have some rest where you go and thanks to Ekhidna for helping with that rest. I fill so sorry for wyett. Since saving the reaper he keeps getting things he not use to shove on to him. I hope Ekhidna takes it as sign of his great writing but I pray for wyett. The poor man. I'm happy the experience open Istenal's eyes...or nose. Seems he got a good shock and change of perspective.

Gady Tuff

You know it seems this conflict is going to draw allot of attention to Clara everyone already knew she was ruthless but now they’ll be forced to admit she’s only ruthless when absolutely mandatory just imagine what life in the principality would’ve been like if she had not ordered the death of those houses and it got out how bad it was and their was no consequences for the perpetrators they would’ve been massive revolts all across the principality

Jeremy Cable

O, you hit the nail on the head with that phrase.

Gady Tuff

Only the die hard incompetent will be against him

Jeremy Cable

Makes you wonder what the noble and his aides thought when Wyatt just went to his room. Hopefully someone told the group about Wyatt being *different * lol

newstart627

Love the scene between Istonel and Wyatt. I wonder what sort of impact Wyatt will have long term on the noble houses. If he can make these sort of changes in such a short time, what will happen in the coming months, years and decades?

Jared

Excellent - though it would appear that Wyatt is being spread quite thin. I imagine a return to the Caiston rebellion beckons.

Peter McEvedy

We definitely appreciate the early drop of another amazing chapter. First let me say, please take the time you need with all our well wishes, and thank you Ekhidna for ensuring there was enough preparation to facilitate the loyalty of your fans. This chapter is right on queue illustrating the role Clara embodies as a noble of The Principality and ruling family over noble houses. She stepped up to the duty of restoring order of the Ferenties House and recovering control over Haego from invaders and rebellion. She mediated talks to weigh the arguments of all parties to restore the peace and Principality rule over Haego, cleverly drawing on unique resource of newly ennobled Wyatt to establish unbiased perspective in this discussion. Istanel was recently introduced to understanding and new respect for Wyatt Staples. The rebel general knew Wyatt had recently been ennobled, even challenged Wyatt to declare why anything he stated could be trusted. Wyatt had listened to the talks, and reflected on the motives of both parties to understand what barriers kept them from agreeing. Using his experience and curt reply, Wyatt declared neither had offered a viable solution, but he recalled a story similar that helped understand why they were invalid choices. He indirectly shared how the solution must come from within the commoners acceptance to return to Principality rule but resisted outsiders directing their lives and would require Haego would need to create nobles trusted to restore the rule and law. Istanel rejected this on basis what was required to justify becoming a nobel exceeded current capacity of Haego and the rebellion. Clara, a masterful tactician, task master, and politician had positioned all the players now and proposed they accept the compromise Wyatt had suggested of ennobling the commoners that demonstrated they were worthy by earning the status by restoring Haego to order while being aided by House Ferenties to create a new minor house under Ferenties and lesser houses of commoners that earned elevation to nobility on Haego. She appeared to be unwilling to accommodate the Haego demand for a mediator between Ferenties and Haego during the transition back to order, but then appointed Wyatt to task as if he would be her voice in the issues that might arrise. Thus Wyatt is bridled to his new noble responsibilities in serving her and her plans, only to discover his returning to Noirnavio was awaited by those seeking to swear fealty to him, former enemies from boarding Gallant Venture. The events snowballing into his dreaded fear of being a noble, Wyatt must now aid in restoring order to govern a world, and is followed by those he had no desire to lead. A beautiful chapter of diplomacy and duty illustrated for our enjoyment. I suspect Clara has staked out Wyatt as a goat to draw Casimir's father into combat. She implies she cannot loiter about this system, but suspect this is a half truth to deceive where she will be, allowing her to use stealth remaining nearby for when Casimir's father arrives to vindicate his son's honor. Wyatt will get some practical experience while also keeping the Haego space out of neutrality to allow her to battle Casimir's father. Repurposing the Drazzan ships will augment system defenses, and confuse all enemies that arrive in system giving her surprise to attack with. Wyatt feels the burden ever growing on his shoulders of being a noble, and worse the source comes down through the plans and actions of his friend the Second Princess. The job role grows ever greater and he struggles to rise to the responsibility. I hope he soon realizes he is positioned in the perfect place to affect change across The Principality by demonstrating how Nobles must lead the commoners to affect greater prosperity and foster loyalty rewards not earned through current practices. I suspect the lesser nobels swearing fialty to Wyatt will be called upon to support his noble oversite Thanks again for a great chapter.

T Griffetts

Please make sure you are telling ppl over on YouTube that it is available over here early so u guys get more love.... You gave us one early a few weeks ago but didn't tell youtube about it...

Jason Watkins

So Wyatt is being staked out as bait for the Castons? Pretty Eyes could teach Machiavelli a thing or two.

Jesse Roberson

As we sometimes say (ironically) in England "No good deed goes unpunished" it could be poor old Wyatt's motto! 😆😆😆😆

Jayne

Just a thought on the last scene with Declan Oakmoon. Delcan and his commoner servants were waiting in front of Wyatt's quarters. It means they are free to roam the ship. Only way I would think that would be allowed is Declan joined the crew of Clara's fleet.

cjoflv

Another fun chapter! Istonel figuring it out on his own was a slight surprise, but nice to see things worked out well between them. I expected as much from Oakmoon, but lol Wyatt's reaction was perfect. He really can't catch a break from being placed on a pedestal by all of the decent nobles.

dotnet

Enjoy your break John you've deserved it!

FeralWolf

Clara definitely pulled the rug out from under Wyatt this time around. She walked him right into where she wanted while making it seem like he came up with the idea himself. I’d be willing to bet that what happens at the end was also coached along by her in some way.

C. Shoeball

Fun ending😁 wunder how he will take them under his wings

Inge Nilsen

The Rise of House Staples has begun. And Wyatt see's there is no way to stop it. New responsibilities (thanks to Clara) and now followers. Tough to be Wyatt right now. Our poor simple commoner from Volantis getting swept up by Clara's plans and his own good deeds.

cjoflv

Poor Wyatt

Jesse Roberson

lol Wayatt just got he´s first minions it must be so frustrating to him too funny

zubzaq

Nobles beware. A House of Commoners and Bastards has begun its rise.

Scot

So now he has followers, the wolfhound has a pack 😂

Wild Card

Wyatt's reaction to Declan pledging allegiance to him is Hilarious 😂

MoMo

Is it just my internet or does it stop playing at 16:20? Just my internet being stupid lmao tho poor poor Wyatt didn’t see the ramifications of helping Declan did he lol 😂

Jeremy Cable

I'm happily surprised to see this especially after finishing up volume one and two of creature 88

Amerhen

Well! We will enjoy every word. So begins the elevations of Wyatt Staples, into the world of the Principality and the inherent dealings with lessor houses pledging to Wyatt's House. Time will be that Wyatt may just become more than a noble but a High Nobel in the eyes of commoners and Nobles alike.

J.R. Turner

Suprise drop! Thx a lot

Jaime Nunes


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