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The Black Ship - Chapter 45 Part 8

It's a bit gory towards the end and probably not quite suitable for Youtube. Youtube will get a very slightly toned down version to replace the bit at the end.

Enjoy!

The Black Ship - Chapter 45 Part 8

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This has kept me enthralled with each chapter dropped. I just can't wait for when Felicity is returned to Lord Draymore, and his daughter for the repercussions of her loss of the other black ships to Clara. And to hear how Lord Cayston is going to react to the video of his "favorite" son and his total destruction. This is the best story I have read/heard for the last 16 years. Love it!

Jeffrey Swayne

I have listened to the story (book one) 5 times. and each time I have picked up on some new nuance. And love learning something new each time. I have listened to book 2, vol 1 7 times at work, and always learn something new each time. And i wait for the next chapter/part to drop so I can hear more about Wyatt's story (past and present).

Jeffrey Swayne

Please see the community 'black ship' chat.

Dennis McCarthy

When were we going to get 46 or chapter 9?

mario Tuatagaloa

Are there many episodes that were toned down for YouTube?

Jesse Roberson

Not today, but it shouldn't be long. Ekhinda is adding then finishing touches.

Dennis McCarthy

So the is no new chapter today?

Wild Card

There is a community black ship chat if you want to jump in there. It's still being written but should be out soon. I think there is a lot of detail in this one and ekhinda wants it to be right! It won't be today.

Dennis McCarthy

When is the next chapter coming out

Xerxes 395

Should start calling Wyatt the black wolf

Matthew Newville

Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing this story with the world.

william seale

EkhidnaWritez? Yes you do!

Larry O.

Absolutely, you do!

Matt Swayze

"The Hidden Wolf, Dog of the Reaper"? Hmmm, I don't know if I like that more. It shows dedication to a specific Aster, so I think I do

Titan

The YouTube version is more of a PG. It's missing four shots at the end and their resulting damage. Glad I have this version to look at

Kenneth Henry

I think Wyatt will get a wolf title, something other than The Lone Wolf. I'm thinking he'll be renowned as "The Hidden Wolf, a Dog of Aster" when his reputation starts to spread

Titan

I am EkhidnaWritez of House Cliffhanger. I make my House proud!

EkhidnaWritez

Lol these are evil tease

Emanuel Jackson

Oh man next please!

Eric Bray

WELL! Now that is an excellent chapter. Can we have more, please? It is very frustrating to get to the payoff and have to wait for an unknown length of time... Ah, who am I kidding? But I will be watching for the next chapter. But definitively more and more and more.

J.R. Turner

Dam that was accelerated and gripping action but sadly too short. Now I’m looking forward to the next chapter even more.

Javier Cervantes

Another great episode thx. I hope that Wyatt make a good use of his shooting practice and training

Jaime Nunes

Well, I hope the Royal marines get there asap. I hope we get a taste of what Cynthia and milkades are doing soon. I’m surprised Clara allowed Wyatt to proceed. ESP after the close call with max. In the end, it passed two quickly which is a testament to the writing! Thanks.

Jason Wilson

YES Wyatt on the hunt ! šŸ‘

rainman2580

Not gory, just let it ride as is. Maybe a little warning at the beginning shouldbe enough. But damm glad i have patron 🤪. I got chills. Can't wait for next chapter. Wyatt will no doubt surprise us. I wonder how he and the royal marines will coordinate together. 🫔🄳

Jose Barahona Lopez

Fabulous

Andi

Let's fucking go!

MRDOOM59


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