The Black Ship - Chapter 45 Part 4
Added 2024-11-13 12:03:25 +0000 UTCAnd now from the Drazzan point of view.. another masterful episode from Ekhinda!
Enjoy the story.
Comments
chapter 45 part 5 is out now!
Dennis McCarthy
2024-11-17 14:25:55 +0000 UTCNo notification Great episode
Andi
2024-11-13 23:41:53 +0000 UTCI haven't made any changes to patreon. It's all the default settings. I'd be interested to know if anyone else doesn't get notified.
Dennis McCarthy
2024-11-13 20:31:19 +0000 UTCYeah, along with "feed" when referencing humans.
Dennis McCarthy
2024-11-13 20:29:31 +0000 UTCThe term “Cattle Ship” just gives me the total creeps. Gotta love the terrible expertise of Cynthia and the Royal Marines.
Vanguard
2024-11-13 20:28:39 +0000 UTCThat was FUN!
Rapture Sinking
2024-11-13 19:12:54 +0000 UTCThis is the second time I didn’t get a notification that the new chapter/part had been released. It happened a month ago and now again today. Is there any one else not getting them? I’m not angry, I’m just wondering why it keeps happening. Awesome episode though!!!
Darwin Johnson
2024-11-13 19:03:20 +0000 UTCNo shot Cynthia just took kill trophies... wtf. Ahahaha.
Bade
2024-11-13 16:56:49 +0000 UTCIt’s amazing
Adana
2024-11-13 16:18:49 +0000 UTCQuite a contrast from what I imagined a Drazzan perception would be like in both behavior and actions. I grant your perspective of a tiered or tasked society, but envisioned a more feral mentality less prone to knowing fear. Feed to behave as predatorial over prey behavior could have been more confusing and a surprise. I give way to the authors perspective not knowing enough to say more. It was a surprise to jump right into the boarding action of the cattle ship, but well executed in plot and goal of the princess's goal to save the human held as feed there. The combat held true to the surprise they would ever face an assault being under prepared and poorly trained to defend. I had hoped for more perspective on the prior ship/fighter combat and reactions to the Staplian tactic used, but the story on whole does not hinge on these details if our plot holds to the succession plot struggle. Thank you for the content, insight, and pleasure of reading more of this beautiful work.
T Griffetts
2024-11-13 15:23:00 +0000 UTCFantastic !!! Ekhinda did it again. Back in chapter 45 part 3 Maximilian said even with Royal Marines and Cynthia Winfield would not be able to take the cattle ship. looks like Maximilian is set up for a fall.
rainman2580
2024-11-13 15:04:02 +0000 UTCWhat a great way to start the day!
Jason Wilson
2024-11-13 13:28:20 +0000 UTCDamm that was awesome. Can't wait to see the pov of Cynthia and the royal marines.
Jose Barahona Lopez
2024-11-13 13:20:53 +0000 UTCI loved listening to it while creating the video. Do you think the YT release needs a "not for children" warning in the title?
Dennis McCarthy
2024-11-13 12:56:16 +0000 UTCThis episode was awesome with a lot of action! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Javier Cervantes
2024-11-13 12:51:30 +0000 UTC
