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The Black Ship - Chapter 45 Part 4

And now from the Drazzan point of view.. another masterful episode from Ekhinda!

Enjoy the story.

The Black Ship - Chapter 45 Part 4

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chapter 45 part 5 is out now!

Dennis McCarthy

No notification Great episode

Andi

I haven't made any changes to patreon. It's all the default settings. I'd be interested to know if anyone else doesn't get notified.

Dennis McCarthy

Yeah, along with "feed" when referencing humans.

Dennis McCarthy

The term “Cattle Ship” just gives me the total creeps. Gotta love the terrible expertise of Cynthia and the Royal Marines.

Vanguard

That was FUN!

Rapture Sinking

This is the second time I didn’t get a notification that the new chapter/part had been released. It happened a month ago and now again today. Is there any one else not getting them? I’m not angry, I’m just wondering why it keeps happening. Awesome episode though!!!

Darwin Johnson

No shot Cynthia just took kill trophies... wtf. Ahahaha.

Bade

It’s amazing

Adana

Quite a contrast from what I imagined a Drazzan perception would be like in both behavior and actions. I grant your perspective of a tiered or tasked society, but envisioned a more feral mentality less prone to knowing fear. Feed to behave as predatorial over prey behavior could have been more confusing and a surprise. I give way to the authors perspective not knowing enough to say more. It was a surprise to jump right into the boarding action of the cattle ship, but well executed in plot and goal of the princess's goal to save the human held as feed there. The combat held true to the surprise they would ever face an assault being under prepared and poorly trained to defend. I had hoped for more perspective on the prior ship/fighter combat and reactions to the Staplian tactic used, but the story on whole does not hinge on these details if our plot holds to the succession plot struggle. Thank you for the content, insight, and pleasure of reading more of this beautiful work.

T Griffetts

Fantastic !!! Ekhinda did it again. Back in chapter 45 part 3 Maximilian said even with Royal Marines and Cynthia Winfield would not be able to take the cattle ship. looks like Maximilian is set up for a fall.

rainman2580

What a great way to start the day!

Jason Wilson

Damm that was awesome. Can't wait to see the pov of Cynthia and the royal marines.

Jose Barahona Lopez

I loved listening to it while creating the video. Do you think the YT release needs a "not for children" warning in the title?

Dennis McCarthy

This episode was awesome with a lot of action! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Javier Cervantes


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