The Black Ship - Chapter 45 Part 1
Added 2024-10-24 15:40:28 +0000 UTCWill those blue bloods finally see!!
The Black Ship continues...
Comments
Love the arc of Duty over unspoken, unwritten bows to selfish nobility. Still Clara realizes that Wyatt wants victory but not at the cost of lives, especial when the odds are stacked against living. And that sutle rewarding "due to concerns voiced by Wyatt" makes that even after he was to be "punished" shows that Wyatt is not after personal glory but victory by superior equipment.
J.R. Turner
2024-10-24 21:14:41 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. Though personally, I'm looking to see Wyatt's personality, relationships, and personal life develop further. I'm hoping to see more chapters dealing with his personal life in the future. Right now Wyatt is going from battle to meeting to battle. Not a negative critique, but a hope for a certain degree of flavour in future chapters.
Arjun
2024-10-24 20:32:14 +0000 UTCGreat chapter Ekhinda , but what secrets will Jincho find hidden in the Noirnavio's systems ? So many possible story lines in this chapter. Your Great ! Thank You Thank You
rainman2580
2024-10-24 19:36:32 +0000 UTCYeah, i don't think that will end well.
Dennis McCarthy
2024-10-24 19:27:03 +0000 UTCStill not happy about any consideration of collecting Drazzan specimens for study.
Vanguard
2024-10-24 19:21:32 +0000 UTCNext please... Brilliant...
Boris
2024-10-24 17:48:19 +0000 UTCA thought just occurred to me. If Jincho keeps digging around the Noirnavio's systems, he might find out the it was actually Wyatt and not Cynthia who commanded the ship during the battle at Jintrax. Hahaha I would hownhe would react if he did.
Jose Barahona Lopez
2024-10-24 17:33:17 +0000 UTCAnother magnificent episode.
Bade
2024-10-24 17:20:20 +0000 UTCLoyalty has its own rewards
Andi
2024-10-24 17:07:07 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, I was glued to to the story!
Javier Cervantes
2024-10-24 16:36:54 +0000 UTCYesssss
Jose Barahona Lopez
2024-10-24 15:45:41 +0000 UTC
