English text
Added 2021-10-23 15:53:47 +0000 UTCThis is the last step to finish KameParadise2, Can you read if this lines are correct?
Future Bulma: Trunks, my son, please, be careful when you travel to the past.
Yamucha: Th.. tha....That girl is dressed in a sexy bunny costume !
Puar: You must focus Yamcha-sama !
Bulma Bunny: Remember our deal.
If you can put out the fire I'll give you a Puff-puff ♥
Dr.Brief: I'm sure my wife is cheating on me...
Panchy: My husband has a lot of strange gadgets in the lab. What a mess!
Lunch Blonde: Get out of my way bitches !!!
Chichi Mother: Since Goku died we have very little money...
Comments
"Future Bulma: Trunks, my son, please be careful when you travel down memory lane." When I watch the TV Special 2 in the original japanese version, Bulma never says "Trunks, my son." Maybe just write "Trunks, please, be careful when you travel down memory lane." "Bulma Bunny: Remember our agreement. If you can put out the fire I'll give you a Puff-puff ♥ " Paf Paf
Viken Urnoc
2021-10-24 00:36:34 +0000 UTCClosest definition is a motorboat
AlmightyGenos
2021-10-23 19:31:25 +0000 UTCWhat is puff puff? In American English that’s an word used for smoking marijuana. Do you mean her showing a peek of her boobs? If you you can say “you can take a peek ❤️ “
SupaidahMann
2021-10-23 18:58:37 +0000 UTCEverything looks perfect. No problems at all!
Brett
2021-10-23 17:05:23 +0000 UTCIt all looks pretty good to me yamamoto-sama!
Sonyian
2021-10-23 17:02:25 +0000 UTCI Can't believe is almost done. The hype is killing me :D
Bullock
2021-10-23 16:19:20 +0000 UTCThis is correct!
ONROK
2021-10-23 16:15:09 +0000 UTCincorrect
2021-10-23 16:10:39 +0000 UTCChichi's line can be changed to "ever since Goku died we haven't had much money" not that the English is wrong. just has a lot more fluidity.
Marcko Resendez
2021-10-23 15:59:43 +0000 UTCAgreed
Roxas
2021-10-23 15:58:15 +0000 UTCChange chi chi lines "we had very little money "
Fighting Master
2021-10-23 15:58:06 +0000 UTCThey are fine grammatically. Though personally, I don't think the Trunks and Bulma dialogue flows naturally. Seems a bit like exposition. I'd go with: "Trunks, please be careful when you travel to the past" Yamcha: "S-she's wearing a sexy bunny outfit!"
Silver Tongue
2021-10-23 15:57:35 +0000 UTCLooks good to me
AlmightyGenos
2021-10-23 15:57:27 +0000 UTCThey all look fine to me
Happytimes
2021-10-23 15:56:53 +0000 UTCBut overall the lines are correct Yamamoto
Roxas
2021-10-23 15:56:52 +0000 UTCAll of the lines look correct. 👍👍
Daniel Onuoha
2021-10-23 15:56:11 +0000 UTCFor lunch blonde I would say "Get out of my way assholes!"
Roxas
2021-10-23 15:55:29 +0000 UTCThey all look good to me
glad
2021-10-23 15:55:23 +0000 UTC
