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English Process...

I am working at english version, I am not good with languages, please tell me if it's ok!

English Process...

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thanks a lot!

YAMAMOTO DOUJIN

“It’s true they are bigger and firmer than my wife” or “it’s true you’re bigger and firmer than my wife”

simon22

Thanks!!

YAMAMOTO DOUJIN

Thanks a lot!!

YAMAMOTO DOUJIN

I hope 💦

YAMAMOTO DOUJIN

Thanks!!

YAMAMOTO DOUJIN

I think the fusion line could be funny if instead of breast size, she says she feels twice the pleasure, or something along those lines.

Darling Maxim

"...I feel stronger, but my breasts..." You needed the "but" for the comma to make sense

ONROK

Yes!

ONROK

Yes!

ONROK

"it's true...they are bigger and firmer than my wife's" (you forgot to write "they")

AlmightyGenos

Change the third speech bubble to, “You’re right. They’re bigger and firmer than my wife’s.”

Tarro the Rambler

Amazing work! Any more Bulma/Android 18 Doujin coming??

cliff wily

Change "The first to cum will lose" to "The first to cum loses"

Conor Flatley


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