Let The Nightshine In
Added 2022-04-07 20:38:42 +0000 UTC
It was a long road since I decided to start. Until now, it has been little more than two months... I had many ups and downs... Like problems with the program, with my computer, besides the fact that... Well, it's practically trash, and that's why it took me so long... But still, I did something that I'm very proud of and I feel very fulfilled. As I said, I'll keep up the pace of updates probably every 1 or 2 months... I'll keep posting how it goes from time to time though. Thank you all for your support and patience, and remember that this prologue is more than anything else a glimpse of what I am capable of. I look forward to your opinions and tell me what you think!
Spanish Translation:
Pc: https://drive.google.com/file/d/10olYEGcF_AYJK9M4cZX48ENALBtDyC7T/view
Android: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1cdUWV9HsVjt9gE2rnj_fzBDWpPF_RJOG/view
Mac: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_0-KMIvumpfXb4v7Skasi7PXHyQPuVcF/view
English Translation:
PC (Win&Linux): https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HOt0tFRS_9Im7wUTGU1w4zrslrRq33FX/view?usp=sharing
Mac: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1uddvT5Jn-nic7GYHjWmuSzXoIBaoSq8R/view?usp=sharing
Android: https://drive.google.com/file/d/11o0LSsxBrwGgF17CKvPML3iI2CiFwFP2/view?usp=sharing
Comments
Solid update on the remake process! Also, thank you for the kind words at the end. I don't think I've done much to help you out, but I'm happy to hear I've been a source of encouragement. :) Your artwork is developing nicely! I think you're getting better and better at HS despite your hardware issues. I think the HS characters are a big improvement over the live action images you were using. A couple suggestions: 1. The gameplay font is a bit too ornate for casual reading, IMO. It's great for title screen/menu screen stuff, but reading dialogue with it takes awhile and that's frustrating. I'd find something a little more simple to use with the dialogue. Your writing is good--players should be focused on that instead of being distracted by fancy lettering. (Just my 2c) 2. The "roommate" stuff. I realize Patreon has silly restrictions about the relationships between fictional characters. One thing I've seen other games successfully do is allow players to choose the relationship on their own. For example, when a new character is introduced, a screen says something like, "This is Olivia. She's around 20 years older than you, but still looks quite youthful and attractive. She takes good care of you, and cares very much about your health and growth. She is your _______ [default: landlady]." Then, throughout rest of the game, that character's relationship is determined by the player. If the player just hits enter, that character is his landlady. Anyway, those are just a couple suggestions. My main advice is to keep tinkering! As the game gets longer and longer, you'll pick up more fans. Keep going!
sukebe_sensei
2022-04-08 22:00:56 +0000 UTCWoohoo. I got a game to play over the weekend. Can't wait to try it out
Kris
2022-04-07 20:44:42 +0000 UTC
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