Dr Hypnos Part 2
Added 2021-04-08 00:56:27 +0000 UTCSo let me know what you thought about the conclusion.
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Ebonart
2021-04-08 19:40:50 +0000 UTCThe first 3/4 of the comic were superb---and then things just ended abruptly---the entrance of the principal was too artificial. I was a teacher in high school and it wouldn't have broken anyone's concentration to have a principal interrupt the ongoing scene---and it shouldn't have been occurring in the school anyway. The closing plot was contrived---but I loved the rest of it!
John Horman
2021-04-08 01:11:28 +0000 UTC
