katarin_story4_26~32
Added 2024-11-24 09:54:39 +0000 UTChttps://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1oHFP1JhpliW67v3T-ZtIGOOaNtB0DW-M?usp=drive_link
Katarin's story has finally come to an end.
Now I'm going to start working on Triss' story.
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alzm54
2024-11-25 14:21:50 +0000 UTCi tink the skin is too clean,more dirty thing maybe better
荷趣
2024-11-25 13:36:52 +0000 UTCI modified it to reflect your opinion.
SOBORO
2024-11-24 14:44:58 +0000 UTCI modified it to reflect your opinion.
SOBORO
2024-11-24 14:44:51 +0000 UTCIn the last picture, top of her head looks a bit strange.
用户7512050851
2024-11-24 12:24:09 +0000 UTCI think these text changes would be good: 21: "chuckled and gestured and they" -> "chuckled. As he gestured they" 23: ... It continued to arouse them. 24: I would leave out the ",who had been away," 29: Maybe change "Then she forced ... 3 Gold" -> "3 gold and im yours" she said timidly. Im already excited for the next part!
SevenDeadLeeSins
2024-11-24 11:10:17 +0000 UTCYay, a Tzeentchian cultist at the end. :3
clibanarii123
2024-11-24 11:02:10 +0000 UTCPrprpr~
nieverter
2024-11-24 10:02:14 +0000 UTC
