Marine Guard Ambush

I need more holidays, got extra time during the thanksgiving time off from work, so can do more.

So I'm just trying something new......doing something more of a comic style. Let me know what you think. Does it tell the story better? or do you prefer full size images?

Thanks

STORY:

It was a typical mundane morning for Sergeant Galpin at this Remote Marine Corps storage facility. He didn't pick this location, but he was told it's a crucial facility for the Military. He doesn't even get to know what they're storing there. "On need to know basis, and you don't have enough clearance" they had told him. Need to know basis my ass he thought. They told him to just do his job and don't ask questions. He's a Military Police for the Marine Corps. 

He starts his routine by checking the log from the shift before him.....Light out in sector 2D, broken part of the fence in sector 2D. Nothing new...same old stuff, the facilities Marines are going ti fix them soon, just not today.  Time to go patrol. 

Nothing interesting to report, it's literally the most boring facility he could ask for. Just big warehouse building, surrounded by smaller buildings and a big yard. Kept on walking.......thinking about what to eat for lunch, the Marine chef for the facility is not that great, but he said meatloaf for today, the best he could cook so far.  Then he heard some echoing footsteps followed by a sound of branch being cracked. 

He stopped on his tracks, heart beating a bit faster. Well this is exciting he thought, maybe an animal? Deer? He's seen a couple so far. He heard more of it, sounding like trying to move cautiously. That's odd he thought, that's not how a deer would act. Adrenaline rushing a bit more.....he heard it one more time...coming from behind him...loud and clear. 

"What the heck is going.........?!" As he turned around.

Then a he saw a glimpse of someone behind him, shooting something at his back, he felt a pinching pain on his lower back, he was thinking about reaching for it, but before he could do that, coming from where the original pain was coming from, he felt a jolting pain going through his entire body, it starting from his mid section, going all the way through the rest of his body. His entire body went stiff, and he lost control of his body. He knew something was wrong, so instinctively he tried to reach for his gun, or radio, or whatever he could.  But he couldn't, all of his self defense training went active in his mind, but nothing he could do to use it, he couldn't control his hands.  Since all his limbs went stiff and all they wanted to do point straight out, he also lost control of his balance.  And there he went, he went down to the pavement with nothing he could do. He was trying to scream too, to warn his partner that should be patrolling nearby, but he couldn't, this pulse for some reason only allowed him to let out a low vibrating moan. He's just trying to embrace his fall, and trying to deal with the pain. As soon as his body touched the ground....HARD...he started shaking uncontrollably, with the pulses of whatever the thing was latched to his back. He then saw the guy that shot him coming over him. Then he was a few more guys getting closer to him. He couldn't get a clear look at them while shaking and in pain.

His mind went wild about what's going to happen. "How long is this thing is going to control him like this" "Who are these guys" "How did they get in".....