How to make a joke - or not
Added 2018-05-05 19:37:21 +0000 UTCSo this is a one-off pic i drew of Laura. The joke was going to be something about her trying to figure out how long she's been tied up for, as the digital clock flashes "12:00", clearly broken.
Laura: Oooh! This is the longest minute of my life!
Thing is, once i drew out the pic, i realized the joke was not as funny as i first thought (i don't know what i was thinking at that time). I mean, the concept itself is funny. Or at least, i think it is. But it feels like the pic or dialog is 'trying too hard' to convey the humour (which, of course, only the best jokes do).
So instead i'm posting it here, to my Patreon, so that you, my highest tier patrons can see it.
Huh. That's funny. Now it's not just a failed pic. It's also a reward!
What do you think? Do you guys like it? Was it worth pulling? Any other kind of one-off pics you think Laura would work well in?
Comments
Eh it's an alright joke, Laura would have to be pretty ditzy though for it to work! What is she gagged with, stuffing and OTM?
2018-05-06 22:43:46 +0000 UTCThanks ... I think. :=P
Mark
2018-05-06 09:54:00 +0000 UTC
