Additions to Chapters 28 and 29
Added 2018-06-28 00:54:03 +0000 UTCHey gang,
In case missed it in my post for chapter 30, I added two new opening scenes for chapters 28 and 29. I'm still testing the waters with what's being revealed but if you can leave comments for what you think here, that would be much appreciated. :D
Cheers!
Rick
Comments
Thanks for that feedback Radar! :D
Rick Scott
2018-06-28 20:20:09 +0000 UTCGood stuff.... keeps the story moving along in three dimensions...well done and nice add.
Radar
2018-06-28 16:57:58 +0000 UTCThanks for that feedback Mike. It's super appreciated, especially with scenes like these. You don't want to give away everything, but you don't want to seem artificially coy either. Especially if its all very obvious. I'd love to hear your theories though, if you'd like to share. I wont say if you've hit it or not, but it would give me an idea of how what i'm throwing down is being interpreted.
Rick Scott
2018-06-28 12:57:01 +0000 UTCI like the additions, it expands on some of the ideas on where I think this is going and I like that. You left subtle hints along the way and I got a inkling of what’s brewing not not 100%. Keeps me reading that’s for sure! Thanks Rick!
Mike Prunella
2018-06-28 12:28:13 +0000 UTC
