Invent ~ Prologue
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“There is more.” Those two words from her lips” this should be 3 words:)
Daniel Allen
2022-04-24 23:18:40 +0000 UTCidk if we're polling for this, but I thought the previous mysterious ending that referenced a black dagger was a cooler and flowed better
rusty_roots
2022-04-21 16:28:38 +0000 UTCThis sentence in the second or third paragraph, "'There <i>is</i> more' those two words..." sounds cooler but is counting wrong
rusty_roots
2022-04-21 16:22:28 +0000 UTCThank you! That makes sense. Sorry to do this b/c it looks ungratful, but can you think of a moment when that was said or implied?
rusty_roots
2022-04-12 01:06:10 +0000 UTCI think Havoc gave up after some years, realizing that Elfrida/Franzine would always flee and there was nothing he could do about it. He therefore focused on researching a weapon that could catch her.
Frank Helle
2022-04-09 16:16:30 +0000 UTCYeah that one.
Addie
2022-03-24 21:39:14 +0000 UTCIs it military speak to say that Havoc took tot he field for the first time in several decades? I thought he was constanly hunting down his elfish daughter
rusty_roots
2022-03-24 16:53:14 +0000 UTCBackAttack or Sam? Or the Black Daggers???? Uuuuu new guild
rusty_roots
2022-03-24 16:51:31 +0000 UTCIt's gonna be that backstab jerk isn't it.
Addie
2022-03-21 18:35:19 +0000 UTCWelcome back Joe.
Raikage
2022-03-21 14:58:36 +0000 UTCRight on time I am just about finished with another re-run through the series
Bilal Williams
2022-03-21 14:24:22 +0000 UTC:0
JumpingPotatoSack
2022-03-21 13:38:18 +0000 UTCNice
Jerry harris
2022-03-21 13:16:12 +0000 UTCJoe is back!
Ajay Metla
2022-03-21 13:01:33 +0000 UTCAw hell ye it's happening
Matt Creighton
2022-03-21 12:55:29 +0000 UTC
