Rexus ~ Chapter 2!
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About the Karmic luck, why isn't he even wondering why it is at -8? Any gamer I know who has negative stats questions it. He might even ask Joe if he knows anything about Karmic luck. In your rewrite, is Jaxon going to comment to Joe that he didn't know that Joe was a class trainer?
Old Dog
2018-12-15 21:37:59 +0000 UTCThank you!!
Dakota Krout
2018-11-21 15:42:36 +0000 UTCOne minor point: The entry for Jaxon's hit points is off. It should read 400/400 ((50)+(350)) not 400/400 ((50)+(30)). The total is correct, it's just that the calculation part that is wrong. And Wow! His Karmic Luck is -8? That explains a couple of things.
Patric
2018-11-12 01:04:45 +0000 UTC
