Desolation || Chapter 33!
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“That’s… Dale shook his head, which felt clear and aware. “My thoughts are so much… crisper.” - Missed a quotation mark after "That's.."
ThreeErmz
2018-09-27 17:23:33 +0000 UTCWell if the aggression was coming from essence overload it could be compared to something like aggression brought on by drugs so it would make sense that the aggression would go away once his body was back in balance. Though now that he seems to have a vastly increased intelligence due to his brain being augmented he may still end up being someone who doesn't take crap off of anyone, he would just go about it a bit differently. I agree though that I don't particularly want him to go back to practically letting people walk all over him just to keep the peace, but I do like his attitude towards fairness and not simply believing in the might makes right mentality. Beside, I would be much more afraid of making an enemy out of a highly intelligent person who also happens to be strong than someone who was only relying on brute strength. Very interested to see where this all goes and how they deal with the S class guy that has taken over.
Jon Coates
2018-09-27 12:33:30 +0000 UTChmm... im a little disappointed that dale seems to have lost his aggressiveness and his take no shit attitude so soon after just getting it. i guess as long as he says neutral I'm fine, i don't like those goody goody characters and i much prefer those who will do what they have to to get what they want no matter the cost
Highfist
2018-09-26 23:59:13 +0000 UTC
