Desolation Chapter 29
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I'm sure that arrangement wasn't Faustian in nature, at all. :)
Dennis Vanderkerken
2018-09-17 16:51:25 +0000 UTCSame Issue here: "Hah! Not even close. Only the concept has to be made all at once.” Dani chuckled as his dreams collapsed." -> My dreams?
Xaim
2018-09-17 13:30:50 +0000 UTCTypo: At this point, so close to finishing the first layer of ley lines… did he care? Nope! (I think you meant did *I* care)
Justin Pieratt
2018-09-17 06:35:09 +0000 UTCcreating an entire friggin planet... damn.
Louis Lariviere
2018-09-16 22:13:12 +0000 UTCIs Eternium Cal's soul?
Addie
2018-09-15 00:55:18 +0000 UTCIt may be worth adding a paragraph or two explaining how to allow another dungeon core to control sections of a dungeon. Does it act like a monster core? Does the new core get bonded to Cal so he can take direct control? If Cal can't take direct control of the new core would Cal do anything to prevent Faus Ro Da from knocking over all Cal's goats?
Steven Willden
2018-09-13 23:30:50 +0000 UTC
