Desolation ~ Chapter 27!
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less dale more cal
Leonardo
2018-10-13 20:43:27 +0000 UTCTo the King of what? Please tell me.
Hillel Hinton-Williams
2018-10-08 01:25:22 +0000 UTCI really like the changes. I noticed another type I didn't see mentioned: You did a good thing(needs either a comma here or the word "when")you got Dani back for me… but this is it, right?>
Justin Pieratt
2018-09-13 23:25:07 +0000 UTCI think those memories got suppressed/removed later on.
Kurt A
2018-09-13 20:53:04 +0000 UTCAah, I can never get enough! Some small oversights: [...] it simply meant that he was in a locked room that [contains/has] high Essence concentrations. [...] but it [is] frequently used as a way to avoid people and decompress from stress.
Kai Kuchenbecker
2018-09-13 19:50:00 +0000 UTCDidn't Dale get his cultivation technique at the end of he 3rd book when he gained all of Cal's memories?
Daniel Dunn
2018-09-13 19:45:49 +0000 UTCI'll clarify. Also, thank you!
Dakota Krout
2018-09-13 16:30:19 +0000 UTCNice. Bet Artorian knows some cool stuff.
Malcolm Tent
2018-09-13 16:27:15 +0000 UTCThe start of the chapter was a little confusing as far as 'closed cultivation" and why Tom attacked Dale. There was also a typo: He saw the Elf who had *spent* over a decade to form the initial stages of this technique, and was startled to find that Cal had added in his own changes. I really liked the interaction with Cal though and am curious about the deal between the dungeon and headmaster that seems to be coming. On a personal note, I hope everything's okay, I saw the posting from others that there was a family issue. You have my best wishes.
Justin Pieratt
2018-09-13 15:45:20 +0000 UTCIt was an apology for the mistake in the ordering. He can consider that Apology Accepted! ;)
Montgomery Box
2018-09-13 15:13:42 +0000 UTCHE made an error when he was uploading them, due to a family emergency. It's fixed now, which is why it doesn't match.
Montgomery Box
2018-09-13 15:13:10 +0000 UTCYeah we got a two-fer. I was pleasantly surprised. More than one chapter is great.
Malcolm Tent
2018-09-10 17:03:37 +0000 UTCUm, this chapter is different to the emailed one... think u might want to check that u sent the right one
Mr IHHI
2018-09-10 16:13:51 +0000 UTCUh, did we skip a chapter? I'm definitely missing something. EDIT: Never mind, it's been fixed.
Karl W Justice
2018-09-10 16:10:29 +0000 UTCDoes the job come with Dental? I mean his other employees get medical, but that doesn't mean it comes with Dental.
Bob of Doom
2018-09-10 16:00:37 +0000 UTC
