Desolation ~ Chapter 23
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Comments
less dale more cal!
Leonardo
2018-10-13 20:27:34 +0000 UTCThat was a good fight. Glad to see Dale use some of those skills the Dark Elf Drummed into his hide.
Montgomery Box
2018-09-05 15:10:43 +0000 UTCIt's a cat after all. Newspaper to the nose.
Montgomery Box
2018-09-05 15:09:33 +0000 UTCGreat feedback guys, thanks so much!!
Dakota Krout
2018-09-05 13:04:02 +0000 UTCEspecially those pesky health bars!
Dakota Krout
2018-09-05 12:59:20 +0000 UTCWhooops!!!!
Dakota Krout
2018-09-05 12:58:24 +0000 UTC> In a few moments, he heard a soft *shushing* sound that he had come to Snowball’s fur lightly brushing against the ground. Missing "recognise as" perhaps?
Addie
2018-09-01 10:08:27 +0000 UTC"...able to bear the same of slaying another team member." shame? "soft *shushing* sound that he had come to Snowball’s fur lightly brushing against the ground." +realize was/recognize as? "...and now a full-sale fight had erupted" scale? Great chapter!
Ashrothe
2018-09-01 05:00:03 +0000 UTCOnly Dale would try to kill a giant cat via boop to the snoot.
Malcolm Tent
2018-08-29 16:29:36 +0000 UTCnow a full-sale fight had erupted. Scale*? :D Measure your goods! Oh. Relationship advice, and some extremely solid character advancement food for Hans. That's a juicy nugget there!
Dennis Vanderkerken
2018-08-29 13:05:15 +0000 UTC"full-sale fight" everything must go!
Bob of Doom
2018-08-29 11:41:43 +0000 UTCAwe, Hans :(
Alex R
2018-08-29 11:08:38 +0000 UTC"not be able to bear the same"
Leaf
2018-08-29 11:05:54 +0000 UTC
