Desolation ~ Chapter 16!
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This comment made me feel serious relief, I kid you not.
Dakota Krout
2018-08-21 16:56:57 +0000 UTCI completely forgot Dale has access to Cal's mana and power. Bet he could've crushed that guildy, but whatever. he's still the man on the ground for Cal. Also I desperately need more Minya lol she's barely been in this. I'm surprised there hasn't been some kind of reconciliation between her and Dale since its essentially him that she's so loyal to. I wonder how that affects her oath to Cal? Is Dale seen as part of Cal? Regardless with Cal's direct assistance I bet he breaks into the C rankls and then hits mage pretty fast. Also hop cal hits A rank this book at least, or better, I would love to see Acme rank spiritual energy lol. Plus all the bribes for Chandra, I'm so excited to see that. Also where is Marie in all this? Henry is around but Marie swore herself to her people first and then Cal, with her kingdom being gone at the moment Cal is her number one priority right? Sorry to ramble, just cant wait to see more.
Malcolm Tent
2018-08-18 07:19:52 +0000 UTCI was pretty mad for Dale after chapter 15, thank you for resolving the worst of that quickly. You really have your finger on the pulse of what Dale's anxiety and primary efforts would be if he were real.
Addie
2018-08-18 06:51:56 +0000 UTCSo, how does he have mana signature and C ranks?
His Dad
2018-08-18 04:54:01 +0000 UTCAlways nice when people think you're weak. Makes it easier to tell your friends from your enemies. The trick is to only appear weak, when you're actually strong. That little peon at the academy isn't long for this world, I don't think.
Justin Pieratt
2018-08-17 16:44:11 +0000 UTCJust this once of course, because he had a hard day. Everyone could use a Snowball cuddle, especially the Cat that Kirby drew up on Discord.
Dakota Krout
2018-08-15 12:42:37 +0000 UTC"I just lost almost everything" Almost buddy. Just almost. Always remember Brianna is Best Girl. "Enroll me at the academy as a direct disciple to Headmaster Artorian." -Spits out Tea at work in cloud format.- YoU WhAT?? -Rapturous reading- -Dabs at mouth- "that he doesn’t want one." No Abyss. Color me curious though. There might me some juiciness to it. “What is going on down there?” I TOO AM QUITE CURIOUS. "There is a stairwell in the back" Appropriate Sass is Appropriate. -Throws scarf over shoulder- "hedonistic hotspot" You misspelled "Cozy AF afternoon nap spot." 10/10 have done this. Except the Hookah. Can't handle smoke. I too Cannot figure out if the knowledge for permanent position is black mail or bribery. Pensive chin stroking ensues. Either way though. The Muffin is having some truly -interesting- difficulties to make these sort of bird noises. -Thor coffee cup smash- I LIKE IT. ANOTHER! Also the muffin has some.. Varied~ essences flowing through him. That's just bonus though, the muffin is a distress, and "need" is not a word you just throw around. Welcome home m'boy. “Not anymore.” Well that explains that. “Cultivating.” -Sagely nod- “Are… are you naked under those pillows?” Is that important? 🙂 "outward instead of the inward" -pensive chinstrokes- I want to see where this goes ❤. "At least… I would have if I were not here." AWYISSSSSSSS. “Certainly.” You have been student for 0.2 seconds. Have the Essence combination for what I do now that I've built a small mountain of pillowy intrigue. -Tosses Casually- "four naturally occurring affinities?" I WAS NOT EXPECTING THIS. ❤ “Showoff!” Appropriate Sass is Appropriate. Overall, in the immortal words previously spoken: *pleased screaming*
Dennis Vanderkerken
2018-08-14 17:24:27 +0000 UTC*pleased screaming*
Leaf
2018-08-13 21:28:46 +0000 UTCVery nice! I like it. You did the start over from nothing trope and weaved it into the story seamlessly. Damn man. With all these chapters, you're not giving much room for people to put the book down. Going to be an all nighter when this one comes out. I can't wait for more of the settlement building in the dungeon. Also in my head canon, snowball wouldn't maul him to death, would just be petting and snuggles.
Jacob Santos
2018-08-13 19:27:46 +0000 UTC
