Desolation ~ Chapter 15 =)
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Well that escalated quickly. One minor nitpick, wouldn't you want to know who that person is that just took nearly everything away from you?
Kai Kuchenbecker
2018-08-18 09:22:07 +0000 UTCHey, I realized what's been bothering me about this chapter. Dale is a bad@$$ who killed an elder who kept dissing him and went toe to toe with a portal mage, ordering him off his mountain. Dale would not take this lying down, and the first words he should have said to someone threatening to pull the dungeon from the sky would have been something like "get off my land." Before the mage even opened his mouth about managing contracts and guild dues. I think a reworking might be needed here.
Justin Pieratt
2018-08-17 04:29:29 +0000 UTCWouldn't the mana contracts of the kingdoms still be in effect since the line of succession wasn't broken and they both still technically have land in mountaindale?
Adam Michael Carroll
2018-08-15 18:23:58 +0000 UTCDon't forget, he's issuing lawful orders to members of the guild. I wonder what it takes to /leave/ the guild. This will be interesting.
Montgomery Box
2018-08-15 12:55:33 +0000 UTCTime for a Power leveling Montage. Cal hits the A ranks, Dale hits the C ranks quickly then by the end of the book hits the B ranks. Maybe who knows, maybe it's time to join the Necromancers or at least have Mountain Dale be a neutral location in exchange oh kicking the Guild out?
Greg Szarko
2018-08-13 17:38:27 +0000 UTCI guess we will hear what Cal thinks about this one. Not sure how this guy just takes ownership of the mountain though. Strength is supreme plus a document from the dark elves? O.o
Leaf
2018-08-10 21:22:06 +0000 UTCPainfully good cliffhanger. Reeeeeeeally excited to see what comes next. ...Might have to look away for a couple weeks so I have a nice chunk to dig into in the future.
IhasaBangBang
2018-08-10 12:53:54 +0000 UTC
